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kuch log ise sach mante hain...Raaj chup ho gaya..uske peeth pe jalan shuru ho gayi thi..jiska matlab wo achchhi tarah janta tha..
"Aditya-aisi shakal kyun bana li,kuch gadbad hain kya..
"Raaj-nahi,sab thik hain..tum patvar chalate raho..
"abey bol na,kya problem hain..aur ye tera chehra laal kyun ho gaya achanak.."
Raaj apne kapde utar kar Nav ke kone me rakhi ek botal Aditya ko deta hain..
"Aditya-iska kya karu main..khane ka maal hain kya iske andar..
"isme jo bhi hain mere peeth me bane hue Nishan pe laga de.."
Raaj apni peeth Aditya ki taraf karta hain..uske peeth ka Nishan jal utha..Raaj chillane laga..
"yyyaaaaaaa jaldi laga us botal me jo bhi hain.."
Aditya turant botal ko khol kar uske andar hath daalkar usme maujood lep Raaj ki peeth pe lagane laga..us Nishan ke pass jalti hui aag shant hone lagi..Raaj ko aaram mila,wo baith gaya...
"Aditya-abey ,ye kya tha..jab se un dragon ko dekha hain aisi vahiyat chize dekhane ko mil rahi hain..
"Raaj-chhod,bahut purani baat hain..ab sab thik hain...
"Aditya-yar tera alag hi fanda hain..ek toh tu achanak se us virane iceland me pahunch gaya..aur bina kisi dar ke tu is bhayankar samundar me mujhe leke aa gaya..aur upar se ye tera jalta hua Nishan..waise ye Nishan hain kis kism ka maine aaj tak nahi dekha...
"Raaj-tu manega nahi na..toh sun,ye Nishan jab main paida hua tab se mere sharir me hain..ek din kuch log aaye aur mujhe aur meri ma ko jabardasti uthakar samundar ke kinare phenk diya..us din samundar ne mujhe aur meri ma ko nigal liya lekin main bach gaya..us din se maine tay kiya ki samundar ke dwara shikar kiye hue ki madad karna..isliye kuch log mujhe Samundar ka Shikari bhi kahte hain.....
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Asman me badal chhaye the..jisse mausam kafi suhana tha..Balladonna me maujood sabhi log apne kamro se bahar aa gaye the..aur thandi hawa ka anand le rahe the...Balladonna me kayi videshi log bhi maujood the,..wo bhi tharki kism ke..isliye unke hatho me sharab ki botal thi...Riya ek sharabi se baat kar rahi thi..Ron ki botal khali ho gayi..usne aas pass dekha..toh Riya jisse baat kar rahi thi uske hatho me sharab ki botal dekhkar Ron uski taraf badha..
"abey ,la botal mujhe de..."Ron ne usse botal chheen li..wo gusse se Ron ki taraf dekhane laga..
"kahi tu mujhse apni sharab wapas toh nahi lene wala..."
"Riya-ab bas bhi karo Ron..ye behuda harkate band karo..
"tumne apni shakal aisi bana rakhi hain..ya haqiqat me tum tumhari shakal itni kharab hain..."
"what..Ron tum had se jyada badh rahe ho..."
"jao main ladkiyo se ladayi nahi karta.."
Riya Ron ko jawab dena chahti thi ,ki samundar me se ek bhayankar awaj ne Balladonna me maujood sabhi logo ko hila diya..
"Riya-Ron ,ye kya tha..
"shayad tumhari bakwas sunkar samundar bhi chillane laga.."
"ya majak karne ka time nahi Ron,akhir itni bhayankar awaj aayi kaha se..."
"dragons ko kabhi dekha hain"
"nahi..ye kya bol rahe ho.."
"aaj dekh lena...sab andar ghus jao..aur mere kamre se mera bandook lake do..."
Jahaj phhir se hilne laga..samne kohra chhane laga..
"ye sale abhi se pichhe pad gaye,maine socha tha Atlantic tak sab shant rahega..."
"Ron kya soch rahe ho..jaldi kuch karo..."
"bola na janeman,andar jao..abey kisi ne mera bandook laya..."
Ek ladka bhagte hue Ron ke pass aaya ,aur apne hath me maujood bhari bharkam bandook Ron ko de di...Ron ne us bhari bharkam bandook ko ek hath se utha liya..
"ab sabhi andar jaoge ya yaha rook kar marne ka intejar hain..."
Captain Seth sabhi ko andar bhejane laga..
"Seth-tum akele inse nipat loge..ya main help karu..
"Ron-umm..tumhari bhalayi isi me hain ki tum inke sath hi jakar apne room me sar chhupa kar baith jao..mujhe kisi ki bhi jaroorat nahi..
"teti jaankari ke liye bata doon ki,main Navy se hoon..ab dekh inka main kya karta hoon.."
Captain Seth us bhayankar kohare me dragons ko dekhkar bola..
"Ron ,ye kaun se prani hain maine aaj tak nahi dekha...'
Ron apni bandook ko kholke saaf kar raha tha...apne jeb se packet nikal kar bandook me barood bharne laga...
"Ron,maine puchha ye hain kaun..."
"dragons ke baare me kabhi suna hain..."
"haan ,wahi na jo aag phenk sakte hain..lekin ye sab toh kahani kisse me hote hain..."
"ye usse bhi khatarnak hain..ab apne admiyo ko bol do main jis taraf kahunga usi taraf jahaj ko mode,yadi zinda rahna hain toh...ur tum mere sath aao..."
Ron aur Captain Seth ship ke saamne aa gaye..
"is adam jamane ke gun se unko maroge,ye chalti bhi hain..."
"bas dekhte rahi iska kamal..."
dragon pass me aa gaye..Captain Seth ne apne army ko upar bula liya..aur un dragons par attack karne ke bola..sabhi un dragons pe gola barood chhodane lage..dragons pass aate gaye..kuch der baad bilkul karib...dragons ko dekhkar sabhi dar gaye ..keval Ron ko chhodkar..
"ship ko full speed se aage badhao..aur aage jakar bayi taraf ghuma dena.."Ron sharab ki botal ka dhakkan kholte hue bola...
dragons ne ship par hamla kar diya..kuch dragons ka size ship ke barabar tha,.unke nukele bade bade daant the..Ron ship ke sabse saamne wale area me gaya...
"abey kha pi ke nahi aaye kya..aur goli chalao..warna aaj gaye kaam se..."
dragons ship ko takkar dene lage..unke mu se aag nikal rahi thi..dragon ek bhayankar awaj ke sath lagatar ship pe attack karne lage..Captain Seth bahar aa gaya..aur hath me rakhe gun se dragons par hamla kar diya..
"Seth-aao salo,tumhe maloom nahi tumhara pala kisse pada hain..tabhi ek vishal dragon ship pe kud gaya..Captain seth ne us par hamla karna shuru kar diya..lekin us dragon par koyi asar nahi hua..wo dragon ship ko dubane laga..
"Seth-Ron,waha khade khade kya dekh rahe ho..meri madad karo...
Ron ne apni botal ek taraf phenk di aur hath me pakde bandook se us dragon pe fayar kiya..Ron ki bandook se goli ki jagah ek bhayankar aag nikli...ship pe sawar dragon jalne laga..Ron ne us jalte hue dragon ko laat mari ,lekin wo vishal dragon hila tak nahi..
"Ron-ship ko ek taraf uthao re..aur ye kinare me lage pillers ko ukhad do,,,
"Seth-ye kya kar rahe ho...
"Ron-mujhe dragons ko samundar me dubana bahut pasand hain...
Navy ke sabhi log pillar ko ukhadne lage..ship kayi feet tak Samundar me dhans chuka tha..Ron waha se wapas kinare par aaya aur Navy army dwara ukhade gaye pillar ko uthakar samne se aate hue dragon par de mara..wo lohe ki rod seedhe us dragon ke sharir me dhans gayi...
"kya nishana lagaya hain ,maine.."
saare dragons ship ko gher chuke the...lekin Ron waha khada dragons ko gin raha tha...
"Seth-ab kya in danav se hath milane ka vichar hain,.jaldi se inpar attack karo..
"Ron-hath milane ka koyi irada mera nahi hain..main toh inhe ginkar dekh raha tha..ki mujhe kitni baar apni bandook chalani padegi..Ron apni bandook ko uthakar pichhe ki taraf chala diya..pichhe se aata hua dragon bhi jalne laga..aur kuch der baad samundar me gir gaya...
"seth-is dragon ka kya kare..ship samundar ke andar doob raha hain..
"sabko andar jakar do ko ek kinare khade ho jaye ,mera matlab bayi taraf phhir jahaj ko dayi taraf ghuma do..."
"tum pagal ho gaye ho..ship doob jayega.."
"abhi kaun si kami hain doobne me..jaisa bolta hoon waisa karo..warna sham ka khana narak ki aag me khaoge..."
Ron apni bandook ka muh baki bache dragons ki taraf karke bandook chalani shuru kar di..kuch dragons ship se bhi takra gaye,,jisse ship ko bhari nuksaan hua...Ron ke kahe anusar Captain seth ne ship ko dayi taraf ghuma diya..ship me maujood wo jalta hua dragon seedhe neeche samundar me ja gira..ab mahol shant ho chuka tha..Ron pass me padi botal ko uthakar andar jane laga...
"Ron-sabko bol do ki,khuli hawa khane wapas bahar aa jaye,,,aur ek mast ladki ko mere kamre me bhej do,.,yaad rakhna videshi honi chahiye.................continue.........
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isliye kuch log mujhe Samundar ka Shikari bhi kahte hain.....


aur bhi jitne bach gye wo bhi laga lena.... per ye bata do ki ye do do samunder ke shikari kaise aa gye..... THE RON..... and THE RAJ... samunder ka shikari.....

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Lord of the rings me jo dragons dikhaye hai kya ye b usi tarah k hai
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Lord of the rings me jo dragons dikhaye hai kya ye b usi tarah k hai
khunkhar update tha bhai..
nahi bhai,ye dragon puri meri kalpana hain lord od the ring ke maine keval do part dekha hain..aur jaha tak mujhe yaad hain..start ke do part me dragon ka koyi lafda nahi hain...haan yadi ye dragons unse match kar gaye toh ye ittefak ho sakta hain...again
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aur bhi jitne bach gye wo bhi laga lena.... per ye bata do ki ye do do samunder ke shikari kaise aa gye..... THE RON..... and THE RAJ... samunder ka shikari.....

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