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I posted my story here - http://www.exbii.com/showthread.php?t=1112782
I thought i will get good replies but i dont.

I thought i will give some good story ...I want to know if at least my story is going bad ...

How do i get good feedback on my story .. please tell me
Don't get disheartened... people are here to notice good nice work ...
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Casinar brother pease meri story Bhoot Bangla padhiye.....maine Index bana diya hai first page pe taaki agar aapko shuru se bhi kahani padhni pade tab bhi aapko aasaani ho.....

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Bhai aap bhi meri story Bhoot Bangla zaroor padhiye....maine apni poori koshish ki hai hooror likhne me.....First page pe index hai....bas links pe click kijiye aur wo update padh lijiye....aur ha apne moolyawaan replies bhi zaroor dijiyega...
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