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aise hi tharki kahani ka wait rehta hai hame..... < image > hum aise tharki hain jinki tharak kabhi khatam nhi hogi....... chuton ki baarish karva do bhai story me......
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Tabhi to likha hai super erotica
abhi to kuchh bhi nahin, jab sex scene aayega tab dekhna

tab to maja aa jayega. aap xxx se aage badkar kuch karna. xxx multiplied by 10 karna. main is kahani main apni kahani dekh raha hoon. khair main is character ki tarah chutiya to nahi hoon lekin kahani mere sath bhi kuch aisi hi hui thi. chod dena is behenki lodi ke kharbooj aur tarbooj.
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kahani ko thoda speed pakadne do, ek ek lund aakar yahi bolega ki "aah, jhadd gaya" ab kal padhunga
Very sexy.....very hot update....pls update more.
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Bharosha karo to shaq na karo

Chheen lunga tujhe ki abhi tak ki updates se bore nahin kiya na, vo bhi to ek challange hi tha, Adult forum, aur uska sex story section jahan 99% kahaniyan sirf logo ka lund khada aur choot geeli karne ke liye likhi jaati hain, un hazaaro kahaniyon ke beech mein maine "cheen lunga tujhe" post karne ka risk liya aur aapp logo ki meharbaani se kaamyaab bhi ho gaya 10 din mein 1 lakh views matlab kam se kam 1000 readers ne to jaroor saare updates padhe hain

Ab risk liya hai ek aisi story likhne ka jiska plot bhi alag ho aur lund bhi khade rahein , chinta na karo, kahani ko thoda speed pakadne do, ek ek lund aakar yahi bolega ki "aah, jhadd gaya" ab kal padhunga

is review ki backchodi main tum apna time na waste karo. humko update chaiye aur woh bhi har 2hrs ke baad. jaldi update lao warna exbii chhod jao.
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is review ki backchodi main tum apna time na waste karo. humko update chaiye aur woh bhi har 2hrs ke baad. jaldi update lao warna exbii chhod jao.
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Har 2 ghante main update to nahi mil sakta... kachra chahiye to exbii per kami nhi hai.
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wah axba wah........

Pahla update Super duper hit hai.......

Super dhansu comedy....

Bus likhte jao..... Hum aapke sath hai....
Balki aap ye bhi kah sskte ho ki aapke sath rahna majboori hai......kyoki aishi jabardust story se door thode hi rha ja sakta hai......

Aapki lekhni ka kamal to pahle hi dekh chuke hai.....isliye jyada kuch kahne ki awasaykta hi nhi hai.......

Bus lage rho update chhapne main
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O tere ki.. Kamaal karte ho blood bhai...
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aap log niraash na hon iska khyaal rakhte hue hi update likhta hun, warna na jaane kya post hoga aur na jaane kaun padhega
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O tere ki.. Kamaal karte ho blood bhai...
Har 2 ghante main update to nahi mil sakta... kachra chahiye to exbii per kami nhi hai.

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