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Sarkar jawaani ko yoon tadapana achchha nahi hai. Itne saare doston ke hote huye jawaani yoon tadapegi to hamare hone ka faayda kya???
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Or nisha ke dono uroj.. Unki to baat hiniraali hai.. Dono uroj himalay parwat ke jaise tane hue uski chhati se chipke hue hai.. Jab vo chalti hai to dono uroj uske chalne se kaamuk andaaz mein upar neeche hilte hue haaayyee.. Dil baith jaata hai mera unhe yu hilte dekh kar. Dono urojo ki motayi aur golayi ek dam gajab hai.. Upar wale ne ek dam alag hi saancha taiyar kara hoga uske urojo ko dhalne ke liye.. Jo bhi unhe dekhta hoga uske muh mein paani aa jaata hoga.. Jaise mere muh mein aa jaata hai.. (Or baaki sab dosto ke bhi)

Itni sab khubiya hone ke baad bhi usme jo sabse jyada aakarshak cheej thi uski gaand..Nisha ki gaand ke baare mein kya likhun kuch samajh nahi aa raha.. Kaatil gaand hai nisha ki.. Mere dil ka katal kar diya nisha ki gaand ne.. Itni mast gaand maine aaj tak nahi dekhi.. Jab vo chalti hai to gaand ke dono gol gol tarbuj bahut kaamuk andaaj mein hilte hain.. Unka fula hua pan uske dono bhaago ko or bhi jyada aakashit banata hai.. Napunsak ka lund bhi khada ho kar jhatke marte hue salami dene lag jaye.. Mera to nisha ki gaand ke baare mein soch kar hi bura haal ho jaata hai.. Lund bithaye nahi baithta.. Baar baar khada ho kar uski gaand ko salaami dena shuru kar deta hai..
"Uroj" jaisee achee shabd ka istemaal kiya achaa laga ... isliyee mere request haii ki "gaand" maat likho usko "nitamb" likho too aur bhi achaa lagega ...
khair this is your story everything depends on you dear ...
the best thing is i love the description ... lovely words ...
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"Uroj" jaisee achee shabd ka istemaal kiya achaa laga ... isliyee mere request haii ki "gaand" maat likho usko "nitamb" likho too aur bhi achaa lagega ...
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sarkar jaisa bataya waisa hi likhege.. Main to peechwada bolta hu.. Gaand kyu likha tha ye agle updt me pata chal jayega.. Or aage se nitamb hi likhuga..
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dekh bhaii tera kahani haii ... tu jis tarah likheega usii mein hii hum khush ho jayenge ...
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sarkar jaisa bataya waisa hi likhege.. Main to peechwada bolta hu.. Gaand kyu likha tha ye agle updt me pata chal jayega.. Or aage se nitamb hi likhuga..

Are Sarkar, yeh sahitya/bhasa charcha mein samay barvad kyon karte hain. Dhada dhad mast update chhapte jaiye. Ap samjha diye aur hum samajh gaye, kaam khatam.

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