[CHAMP ARYAN]

Hello Friends. Me last 1 year se Exbii pe Silent reader tha fir mene socha kyona sabse interect karu to maine login create kiya.aaj login ke kuch dino baad maine kuch acche dost bana diye he.main jo thread start karne ja raha hu woh ek love story rahegi.yeh thread me pinuram dada,mere dost Akash,Reet,Karuna,Harry and rehan ko dedicate kar raha hu. I m hoping ke aap ko pasand aaye yeh story.

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[Drift_King21]

Aryan Bro for your New Story and for becoming a Writer

You story will rock ... for the 1st Update ...

[pinuram]

Congratulation Aryan... Shuru karoo Kahani..

[CHAMP ARYAN]

UPDATE : 1

Ek bahot hi soft petal jaisa kuch mere honth pe muje feel huya.wo bahot hi acchi feelings thi wo mulayam touch,ek honey jaisi mithas aahhaa kya cheez thi maine apne upper lips ko thoda open kiya to ek pyarasa hathiyar ne mere mooh ke andar attack kar diya.......
maine bhi apni toungue nikali fir kya hum dono ki toungue ek dusre ko choosne lagi mere dil ki dhadkan to rock music ki tarah baj rahi thi........

Fir achanak mere pet pe jordar prahar huya.......... main dard se karah utha mere muh se... aaahhh nikala nahi tha ke ek aur prahar huya.....
usse meri aankh khooli to maine dekha ke mere samne meri badi behan nirali khadi he aur woh jor jor se haas rahi thi....

muje kuch samaj nahi aaya ke kya ho raha he. Main aaspass dekha to main apne bedroom me akela tha.
wtf... ...main jor se chillaya lekin nirali pet pakadkar hase ja rahi thi.
maine apne sir pe hath ghumaya aur balo ko sahelaya aur nirali ko pucha sis tum kab yaha aayi ?
Nirali ne stern hote huye jawab diya "ki jab me apni toungue bahar nikal ke hawa me ghuma raha tha tab woh aayi."
Ohh shit mere muh se itna hi nikala
(to be cont)

[Sexy Reet]

Aryan for starting new story........
Guru ab jaldi se ho jayo shuru.....

[pinuram]

Few things I want to mention.
[1] Write in simple language
[2] Keep different paragraphs for different instances
[3] Don't rush your self into anything, try to build the story in your normal flow.


Best of Luck Brother !!!!

[pinuram]

Originally Posted by CHAMP ARYAN

Ek bahot soft petal jaisa kuch mere honth pe muje feel huya.wo bahot hi acchi feelings thi wo mulayam touch,ek honey jaisi mithas aahhaa kya cheez thi maine apne upper lips ko thoda open kiya to ek pyarasa hathiyar ne mere mooh ke andar attack kar diya maine bhi apni toungue nikali fir kya hum dono ki toungue ek dusre ko choosne lagi mere dil ki dhadkan to rock music ki tarah baj rahi thi. Fir achanak mere pet pe jordar prahar huya main dard se karah utha mere muh se aaahhh nikala nahi tha ke ek aur prahar huya usse meri aankh khooli to maine dekha ke mere samne meri badi behan nirali khadi he aur woh jor jor se has rahi thi.muje kuch samaj nahi aaya ke kya ho raha he. Main aaspass dekha to main apne bedroom me akela tha.wtf main jor se chillaya lekin nirali pet pakadkar hasi ja rahi thi.maine apne sir pe hath ghumaya and mere balo ko sahelaya and nirali ko pucha sis tum kab yaha aayi ? Usne stern hoke jawab diya ke jab me apni toungue bahar nikal ke hawa me ghuma raha tha tab woh aayi. Ohh shit mere muh se itna hi nikala (to be cont)

Kya baat hain, ek sapna woh bhi WTF se shuru .. good good ..

[Sexy Reet]

Main toh jeebh nikalti hun aakash ko chidane ke liye....
ye janab sapne mein hi itne mast ho gaye ki hawa mein hi jeebh hilane lage.....great start....

[CHAMP ARYAN]

Originally Posted by Drift_King21

Aryan Bro for your New Story and for becoming a Writer

You story will rock ... for the 1st Update ...

thanx a lot dk bhai for visiting my thread.isse better kya ho sakta he ke mere thread ka first comment the drift king ka ho. Thanx a lot bro.

[rehankhan143]

Originally Posted by CHAMP ARYAN

Hello Friends. Me last 1 year se Exbii pe Silent reader tha fir mene socha kyona sabse interect karu to maine login create kiya.aaj login ke kuch dino baad maine kuch acche dost bana diye he.me jo thread start karne ja raha hu woh ek short story rahegi. Mere pass filhal time ki kami he is liye ek short story se apni writing ki start kar raha hu .ye thread me pinuram dada,mere dost Akash,Reet,Karuna,Harry and rehan ko dedicate kar raha hu. I m hoping ke aap ko pasand aaye yeh story.

for starting new thread aryan....!!

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