> 'Meri suhagraat-(A revenge love story),
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| Suhagraat par likhi gayi 10 sabse achchhi kahaniyon me se ek. |
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| Mujhe ye kahani best 'suhagraat' erotika thriller lagi. |
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Vaise dosto 2pages me 2500 views par comments bilkul nahi. Shayad apko kahani pasand nahi aa rahi. Kam se kam bataiye to sahi plz. Faltu me mobile par hath to nahi ghis raha main. Kahen to quit karen story ko?
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good writing keep posting
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#23
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Thanks Sir
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Very good start ... aur updates ka intezaar hai.
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Thanx
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Good start... waiting for updates
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Thanx for ur comment
update will come at 12 pm |
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Thanks
Thanks Hotboy! Update will be at noon
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Meri Suhagraat
8-Subah ankh kafi der se khuli. Raat ka khumar abhi nahi utra tha. Main jaldi se nahaya dhoya aur khun se sani chadar ko saaf kiya. Alka ne chay aur achar ke sath parathe samne rakh diye. Mera dil khush ho gaya ye mera favourite nashta tha. Maine jaldi se khana khaya aur kuch kaam ki talash me nikla. Filhal dopahar tak koi kam nahi mila. Ghar pe aaya to maa ne khana pakaya aur maine garam garam kha liya aur wo mujhe khana khilakar padosh ki chachi ke yahaan chali gayi. Wo dopahar ko aksar wohi chachi ke pas baitha karti thi. Alka bi school chali gayi thi. Main thoda sa pariwar ke baare me bata deta hu. Kafi sadharan pariwar hai hamara. Maa, papa mai akela bhai aur 2 bahne. Ek is samaya mausi ke yahan thi kranti. Alka ke exams ane wale the wo school chali jaati thi. Papa up roadways me se retired the aur filhal unhe kuch kam nahi tha to wo subah 10 baje ghar se nikalte aur sham 6, 7 baje tak hi wapas aate the. Khair ma ke jane ke baad ghar khali ho gaya aur Ragini adat ke anusar ghar aa gayi. Wo mujhse ankhen nahi mila rahi thi, maine bi kuch nahi kaha. Wo chupchap chair par baithkar tv ka remote hath me lekar channel badalne lagi. Adha ghanta aise hi beet gaya wo kuch na boli. Aakhir maine hi puch liya... Kya baat hai naraj ho? Usne kaha main kyon naraj hone lagi. Fir ye muh fulaye kyon baithi ho? Maine kaha. Aapko kya pata aapke to maje ho gaye, halat to meri kharab hui. Oh dear!!! Bolo to sahi kya hua? Mujhe itna dard hai ki.....? Ab tumhe kya samjhau? Dard oh! Main turant samajh gaya. Ye sab karne ki kya jarurat thi vaise hi itna khun nikal diya.
''dekho Ragini pehli bar me aisa hota hai. Thoda bahut dard to hota hi hai. '' lekin aapne to use faad hi dala pata ghar pe dekha tha meri tangon par khun laga tha. Aur pata hai dekhne me kaisi ho gayi hai ab aap rehne do mujhse kaisi kaisi baaten kahalwa rahe hain. ''kyon kaisi ho gayi hai? Dikhao to sahi... '' pagal ho kya? Main thik hu? Main tumhe nahi dikhaungi. Lekin aisi jagah problem hai ki main doctor ko bi nahi dikha sakti. ''oh meri jaan! Doctor ke pas jane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Tum mere pas aao. Maine use apne pas khicha aur god me dalkar uske mathe ko chuma aur uski age ayi hui laton ko piche ki or karke sanvar diya. Uski ankhon me real me udasi thi. Maine uski aankho ko chuma aur kaha... ''kya tum kal ki ghatna se dukhi ho? '' nahi lekin mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki ye sab hota hai. Chahti to me thi hi tumhe lekin baki ka dimag us film ne kharab kar diya. Isme aap ki koi galti nahi hai main ye bi manti hun lekin mujhe laga aisa nahi hona chahiye tha. Main to filmo me dikhaye pyar ko hi pyar samajhti thi mujhe nahi pata tha ki aisa hota hai. Main to aapko tv band karke ghante adhe ghante dekh liya karti thi aur kabhi chori se apke hathon ya sar ko chum liya. Bas dil me yahi ichchha thi aapko mere pyar ke bare me pata ho. ''khair chhodo ab jo ho gaya hai uske bare me negative baat karke uske mahatva ko kam mat karo. Aur aisa kehkar maine uske pent ki zip ko aur button ko khol diya. Aaj usne jeans ka pent aur shirt pahna hua tha. Usne mujhe roka ''nahi plz, aisa mat karo, mujhe sharm aati hai. ''Kal sharm nahi aayi thi? '' kal to pata nahi kya ho gaya tha? Maine uski tangon ko uthakar pent ko alag kiya aur uski penty ko kheench kar nikal diya. Real me usko pain ho raha hoga kyonki uski chut buri tarah suj kar kal ki doguni moti ho gayi thi. Maine uski chut ko pakad kar haule se dabaya to wo tadap uthi. Main use haule se sahlana shuru kar diya. Main kuch der bad uthkar andar gaya aur balm le aya aur use fir se god me litakar haule haule uski chut par balm ki malis karne laga. Use shayad aram milne laga aur usne apni ankhen band kar li. Last edited by Reena tomar : 27th November 2012 at 07:39 PM. |