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Ek Sasural
Hi Doston
Aaj main ek naya thread shuru kar raha hoon. Ye kahanai un sab Exbii writers se prerit hai jo Sasural ki kahaniya likhte hain. Maine aisi kaafi kahaniya padi aur sach men mujhe unse bahut excitement bhi hui. To un sab kahanion ka natija hai ye kahani. Ab kahani ke main characters se aapka introduction: Babuji - Naam Rajpal umar 45 saal, height 5 ft 9 inch, rang gehuaan, patli moochh rakhte hain aur paidaish se unke right hand ki forefinger aur middle finger judi hui hain. Iska iss kahani men bada yogdaan hai. Rajkumar urf Raju - Ghar ka sabse bada ladka, umar 32 saal, height 6 ft 2 inch, rang gora. Inki khasiyat ..baad men bataenge. Meena urf Minni - Ghar ki sabse badi bahu aur Raju ki wife, umar 31 saal, rang gora, height 5 ft 6 inch. Ye ek gareeb ghar ki paidaish hain. Bade pariwaar ki sabse badi ladki. Inke ghar men koi bhi sgaa bhai behen nahi tha. Inke pita ne 2 shaadian ki. Pehli se Minni hui aur 2 saal ki umar men Maa ka dehant ho gaya. Uske baad pita ne doosri shaadi ki aur unse 2 ladke aur 1 ladki hui. Woh sab ek gaon men rehte hain. Sujit - Ghar ka majhla beta, umar 30 saal, rang kaala, height 5 ft 8 inch. inki khasiyat hai inka hasmukh swabhaav aur woh bhi apne ko leke. Sabke beech apna hi mazaak bana lete hain. Rakhi - Sujit ki wife. Umar 28 saal, rang gora, height 5 ft 9 inch, inki khaasiyat ki yeh ghar ke har sadasya se pyaar karti hain .. aur unka har taike se khayaal rakhti hain..haan par ghar ke kaam men kuchch kamzor hain. Sanjay - Ghar ka sabse chhota beta, Umar 29 saal, rang gehuaan, height 5 ft 11 inch, padai men awwal, kaam men tez, dimaag se tez. Chup rehna pasand hai inhe ziadatar, par jab bolte hain to baaki log sunte hain. Inki ek aur khasiyat hai aur woh hai masti men aake inka jungleepan. Agar kabhi ye daaru pi ke tunn ho jaen to jaise ki baaki log ludak jaate hain ye uska ulta karte hain. Ye aur bhi active ho jaate hain. Ye khaasiyat inke bahut kaam ki hai..!! Sakhi - Ghar ki sabse chhoti bahu aur Sanjay ki wife, Umar 23 saal, rang saanwlaa, height 5 ft 1 inch, sabse chulbuli, aur sabse ghul mil ke rehne waali. Inki khasiyat hai inki fashion sense. Kisi bhi dress men ye achhi dikhti hain. Doosre inki khaasiyat hai inke khoobsoorat baal. Inke baal inki kamr se bhi niche tak lehrate hain aur ye unka bahut khayal bhi rakhti hain. Ye sab sadasya ek hi ghar men ek chhote se sheher men rehte hain. Jaisa ki chhote shehron men hota hai gali mohalle ke log inhe achhe se jaante hain aur aapsa ki khushion aur gham men shaamil hote hain. Par chhote shehron ki ek khasiyat aur bhi hai aur woh hai band kamron ke pichhe hone waali kahania. Jo cheezen bade shehron men khule aam bina pardon ke hoti hain wohi cheezenchhote shehron men pardon ke pichhe hoti hai. Agar padosi ko pata chal jae to baat kahan ki kahan pahunch sakti hai. par is ghar ka hisaab thora alag hai.... ye ghar sheher men hote hue bhi thora alag hai. Kyonki is ghar ke chaaron taraf ek bada aangan hai. Aur ho bhi kyon na after all Babuji shehr ke puraane raeeson men se ek hain. Poora ghar aur aangan mila ke 4 acre ke kareeb jagah hai. Chaaron taraf 8 ft ki deewar aur beechon beech 6 bedroom ka makaan. Ghar ki entry ke baad ek bahut bada drawing room hai. Usse lagta hua ek bada sa dining area aur uske saath kitchen. Iske alawa ghar ke doosre hisse men sabke kamre hain jinko ek common corridor jodta hai. Sabse pehle Babuji ka kamra hai aur unke theek saamne Raju ka. Unke sath Sanjay ka aur saamne Sujit ka. Unke baad 2 guest room hain. Har kamre ke sath ek attached bathroom hai. Is prakaar 3 - 3 kamro ke 2 set corridor ke dono taraf hain. Har set ke kamro men apas men bhi ek ek door hai jisse ki ek room se doosre room men ja sake. Ghar ki chhat pe ek 2 room ka set hai jisme naukaron ke rehne ka prbandh hai. Is ghar men aaj se pehle hamesh naukar raha hai, par jab se Dinu kaka ka dehaant hua tab se koi bhi achha naukar nahi mil paaya. Aajkal ye parivaar ghar men bina naukar ke guzara kar raha hai. Bas ek naukarani hai Kamla jo ki subah se leke shaam tak ghar ke kaam kaaj men madad karwa deti hai aur chali jaati hai. |
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''Arre badi bahu idhar to aana... kya kar rahi hai..agar khaali hai to aaja zaraa '' Babuji ne drwaing room ke sofe pe lete lete awaaz di.
''Jee babuji abhi aai....hanji lijie aa gai..bataiye kya kaam hai..'' Minni ne kamre men daakhil hote hue kaha. Cream color ki saari ka pallu apni kamar men dabae woh Babuji ke saamne sofe pe baith gai. ''Kya kar rahi thi bahu ?? Dekh na tera serial aane waala hai..chal dono mil ke baith ke dekhte hain..kya kuchhh kaam kar rah thi kya..???'' Babuji ne puchha. '' Ji nahi bas kaam khatam kar ke apne kamre men sustaane jaa rahi thi. AAjkal is serial men man nahi lagta. jab se us heroine ka pati maraa hai tab se ye bechaari safed saari men ghoom rahi hai..mujhe to ispe taras aata hai aur iske puraane boyfriend pe bhi jo aaj tak iske aage pichhe ghoom raha hai. Dekhie na Babuji ye samaj ki kaisi parshaani hai ki 2 pyaar karne waale apas men mil bhi nahi sakte. To kya hua ki woh ek widhwa hai ...to kya use pyaar ka hak nahi hai....kya uske seene men aur uske badan men meri jaisi aag nahi lagti hogi...?????'' Minni ne thora udaas aur thora gusse men kaha. '' Arri bahu tu kyon gussa hoti hai ye to bas ek naatak hai...koi hakeekat thore hi hai, aur phir tujhe kya tere pass to Raju hai na..ya phir baat kuchhh aur hai..bata...mujhe agar woh aajkal tera khayal nahi rakhta to 2 chaante doonga use..'' Babuji ne gussa dikhaya. '' Babuji aap gussa na karo aur na hi unhe chaanta maarna par sach to ye hai ki woh aajkal meri bhookh nahi mitaate. Main pyaasi reh jaati hoon aur woh apne maje leke so jaate hain. Pata nahi kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta hai ki inka koi aur lafda chal raha hai '' Minni udaas ho gai. '' Achha to tune pichhli baar mujhe kyon nahi bataya...kab se chal raha hai..3 din pehle hi to hum saath the tab to tune kuchh nahi kaha...'' '' Arre nahi Babuji ye parson se ho raha hai. parson raat maine inka kitna khayaal rakhaa man laga ke inko kitna choosa aur kitne maze se inki gotion ko sehlaaya par ye kuchh karne ke mood men bhi nahi aae.......aur jab main inke muh pe chadi to inhone bade unmane dhang se meri munia men apni jeebh di. Mujhe to samjh nahi aai.....sach kehti hoon babuji agar ye aapke saath karti to us raat kam se kam mera 4 baar kaam hota. aur inko dekho bas ek baar kia aur so gae. Aur to aur tab se ab tak din men ek baar bhi nahi kia inhone mere saath''' aur ye keh ke Minni subakane lagi. ''' Arre arre tu roti kyon hai mere hote hue.....main use sabak sikhaunga aaj raat. Aaj tum raat ko Raju ko leke mere kamre men aana...mujhe pata hai ki tera khayaal kaise rakhna hai..aakhir tu ghar ki sabse badi hai aur meri pyaari bahu haiii....chal ab chup ho jaa aur dekh tere paas aate hi mera kya haal hua hai...dekh meri dhoti men tamboo ban gaya. Chal aaja meri pyaari bahu aaja apne sasur ji ka khayaal kar aur apni munia laga is tamboo pe....aise rote nahi hai...aaja main tere hothon pe hansi laa doon...aur dekh mujhe pata hai ki tujhe kaise hasaana hai..dekh maine dhoti bhi khol di.....ab to laga de apne honth is bechaare pe...''' Babuji ne apni dhoti ko kholte hue Minni ke chooche sehlaae.. ''' Haaai babuji kabhi kabhi to man karta hai ki aap hi ko apna mard bana loon..aap kitne achhe se samjhate ho mujhe.. sach men agar ye aur aise chale to main aapke kamre men shift ho jaungi...kam se mera nanga badan dekh ke aap to 2 - 3 baar karoge mujhe...naa ki inke jaise jo ek baar bhi nahi kar rahe aajkal...arre ye kya Babuji ...aapka supada to laal hua pada hai aur ye kharonch kaisi hai niche ke hisse men....haaiiii daiyaa ye to aapke tatton pe bhi kharonch hai...ye sab kya ho gaya.....''' Minni ne apne sasur ji ka loda sehlaate hue kaha. Uski nazar unke lund pe tiki hui thi aur woh dekhe jaa rahi thi aur sehlaae jaa rahi thi. '''uummm bahu tu iski chinta na kar ...bas chal ab apne hothon ki muskaan ispe chipka de...dekh kaise taras raha hai ...tujhe yaad hai na ki 4 din ho gae tujhe ise choose hue.. 3 din pehle bhi sirf ise apne bhosde men mia tha...us din tere muh men dard tha aur tune mana kar dia tha.....ab aaj to dard nahi hai na...to chal meri raani aajaa is pyaar se apne hothon se puchkaar de.....'' Babuji ab sofe ke saamne khade khade apne mota lund Minni ke chehre ke saamne lehra rahe the. ''' Haan babuji mujhe sab yaad hai....aur main to us din bhi choosna chahti thi ,, par kyaa karti...majboor thiii...par aaj to zaroor choopa loongi aur aaj aap dekhna thook bhi kitna niklega..aakhir kaar main bhi to chudaas hoon 2 din se..aaiye na Babuji aage bad ke mujhe mukh chodan kijie...aur ye kya aapne dhoti nahi utaari abhi tak ....jabki aapko pata hai mujjhe aapki nangi gaand se khelne bahut psand hai loda muh men rakh ke....oooooohhhh Babujiiii..aaooooo naaaa...ummmmmm....sluurrrrp...sluurrrrrrruuuppp...uuummmmmmmm..uuummmmm yyessssss....ooohhhh...oooooo babuji meri muniaaaaa......aaahhhhh ye to paniyaaa gaiiii....babuji aapka sakht moosal dekh ke........chalie naaa ab aapke kamre men chalte hai....uuummmmsllluurrrrrrp...slrrrrrrupp.....wahan poore nange hoke karenge.....yesss yessss babuji aise hi meri nippple khinchooooo....uuummmm''''' Minni aane waale sambhog ki khushi men mast hote hue boli... |
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nice story
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Nice begining
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Wow nice story. Pls. Continue.
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Good start.keep roking dear...
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Dear kahani likhne se pahle patron ki umar ka agar sahi se khyal rakkha jaye to hi kahani ka asli maja aata ya fir umar ka jikar hi mat karo
aapke hisab se babuji aur bade bete ki umar main sirf 13 sal ka farak hai to uski mata ki umar mein kitna hoga its a big question??????????????? think about it.... sorry if u hurt Quote:
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nice starting
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Great!!!!
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