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#121
2nd August 2012
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Last edited by bilandar7 : 2nd August 2012 at 04:16 PM. 
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2nd August 2012
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Update plz
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#124
3rd August 2012
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Update-7
"jab tujhe balladonna ka captain banaya gaya tha toh apne sath doorbin vagareh nahi rakhi thi kya...maloom nahi tujhe Captain kisne banaya"Aditya ,Captain Nair ko tana marte hue kaha.. "tu bhi toh Captain hain,tujhe hosh nahi tha ..mujhe bol raha hain.." "tu mujhse panga mat le ,warna tu mujhe janta nahi ,mera nam Captain Aditya hain..." "toh kya hua ,mera nam bhi Captain Nair hain..wo bhi tere jaisa aisa waisa nahi hoon...Balladonna ka Captain hoon..." "sale teri itni himmat ki mujhe yani Captain Aditya ko aisa waisa bola..ab tune teri toh... "Aditya khada hua..aur Captain Nair ko jhadkte hue bola..Nair bhi akhir ek Captain tha,,use bardasht nahi hua ki koyi uski ijjat utare..wo bhi Aditya ko bakta hua khada ho gaya..dono ko rokne ki Raj ne koshish ki..lekin Raj dono ko rokne me nakam raha..dono ek dusare se ladte rahe..jiske karan jis naav pe wo teeno baithe the..wo naav palat gayi..teeno samundar me gir pade..... ****************************** Ron apni hamesha ki adat ka palan karte hue..apni mu me sharab ki botal lagaye ship ke bahar aaya..sabhi ship ki marammat kar rahe the.. "oye..ye sab kya kar rahe ho.." Captain Seth sabhi ko instruction de raha tha..Ron ki baat par kisi ne dhyan nahi diya.. "Ron-kar lo marammat ship ki..bahut jald hi phhir se dragons aane wale hain.. is baar sabhi ne Ron ki taraf dhyan diya ..sab apna kaam chhodkar Ron ki taraf dekhne lage... "tumhe kaise pata ki ,wo dragons phhir se aayenge.."sabhi ek sath chillaye.. "Ron-ab aaye na line pe.. "Seth-oye,tu inhe dara kuun raha hain..sabhi apna apna kaam karo ise bakwas karne ki adat hain.. "Ron-captain,kabhi manav dragon ke baare me suna hain... "ab tu mujhe kaam karne de warna ship ke neeche phenk dunga.." "mat man,mujhe kya,,akhiri baar bhi maine tujhse puchha tha ,dragons ke baare me yaad hain..lekin tu mana nahi tha,." Ron ,waha se chala gaya..wo riya ke room ke taraf ja raha tha..Riya apna room lock kar rahi thi..Ron ,riya dekhkar mushkurane laga... "Riya-yaha kyun khade ho.. "abhi tak naraj ho,janeman..main yaha tumhe kuch dikhane aaya tha.." Riya ko laga ki Ron apni gun dikhayega ,lekin Ron apna hath apne lund ki taraf le gaya,... "Ron-dekho ,kal raat se khada hain.. "sun be jungali ,dobara yadi aisi harkat ki toh balladonna ke neeche phenkwa dungi..." "chhoti baaton pe itna gussa nahi hote janeman,pahle tum batao ki tumhe us devils traingle par kya milega.." "wo toh tumhe zindagi bhar maloom nahi chalega.." "sahi me,yani zindagi bhar tum mere sath rahogi,." Riya waha se chali gayi.. ****************************** "ab tum dono me se koyi bhi kuch bola toh ,is baar dono ko yahi phenk kar chala jaunga.."Raaj apne kapde ka utarte hue bola... "Aditya-abey oye captain apne kapde nikal de,warna thandi me mar jayega..mujhe marne ki jarurat nahi padegi.. "Nair-captain kabhi apna dress nahi nikalta.. "Aditya-Captain ,tera ship kaha hain...kahi tu is naav ka captain toh nahi hain..he..he.. "Raaj-tum dono phhir chalu ho gaye be... Raaj bolte hue chup ho gaya..use samne se ek vishal ship aata hua dikhayi diya... "Raaj-abey kya yahi hain ,tumhara Balladonna ship ,. Aditya aur Raaj samne dekhte hain..Nair khusi se uchal padta hain.. "Nair-yahi hain Balladonna..mera ship ,ab sabse pahle waha pahunchkar us jungali ko bahar phenkunga...
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#127
3rd August 2012
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Update-8
"Nair-yahi hain Balladonna..mera ship ,ab sabse pahle waha pahunchkar us jungali ko bahar phenkunga... "Aditya-us jungali ko baad me bahar phenkna pahle pichhe dekh... pichhe ka najara dekhkar Captain Nair ka halak sukh gaya..jish Balladonna ki wo itni der se tarif kar raha tha..utna bade bade kayi dragon usi taraf aa rahe the... "Raaj-ye dragon apni seema kaise paar kar sakte hain..atlantic ocean ke is taraf inka aana mana hain...ab gaye kaam se.. "Aditya-dekh bhai ,ye koyi niyam kanoon batane ka waqt nahi hain..jo bhi ho mujhe pakka yakin hain ki hum koyi sapna nahi dekh rahe hain..jo bhi hain ye sab sach hain... "Captain Nair-mujhe ek baar Balladonna me phuncha do ,in salo ko main bhoon dalunga... "jaldi jaldi patwar chalo..hume jald se jald balladonna me pahunchna hoga...warna aaj in khooni darindo ke mu ka niwala ban jayenge..." Ron ship ke bahar hi khada tha..use samne se aate bhayankar toofan ki bhanak lag gayi... "aaj wo danav bhi aaya hain...aaj toh Balladonna ko upar wala hi bachayega..abey is mamooli jahaj ki chhod,tujhe kaun bachayega..."Ron bhagta hua ship ke andar ghus gaya.."abey kaamchoro baar jao...hamla karne ki taiyari karo..dragon ka hamla hone wala hain..kaha mar gaye sab ke sab.." Ron ke hungame ke karan sabhi bahar aaye.. "Riya-ye hungama kyun macha rakha hain Ron.. "Ron-pichhe dekho..tum sabke mehman aa rahe hain... Ron ke kahne par sabki najre pichhe ki taraf gayi...sabki saanse atak gayi..balladonna ship se bhi bade bade dragons.. "Seth-Ron,maine tujhe kaha tha..apni gun dikha de lekin tu nahi mana ab in dragons se mukabla kaise kare.,jo humare ship se bhi bade hain.. "Ron-abhi wo pass nahi hain Captain,isliye itne chhote dikh rahe hain.. "kya,ye tujhe chhote dikh rahe hain..." "captain abhi wo bahut door hain..warna unke ahat se hi tumhara ye jahaj doob jata... "tumhe ya sab kaise maloom Ron..aur hum tumhari baat par kaise yakin kar le..." Captain Seth ke is sawal par Ron ne apne pass hi khade navy ek army se uski gun chheen li..aur Captain seth ki taraf nishana lagane laga..ship me maujood sabhi achambhit rah gaye ki Ron ,Captain seth par kyun Nishana laga raha hain... "Seth-abey pagal ho gaya hain kya..maine thik hi toh sawal kiya... "Ron-samne se hat...dragons pe nishana laga raha hoon..Captain Seth waha se turant hat gaya..Ron ne kayi goliya fayar ki lekin dragon ki taraf koyi halchal nahi hui.. "dekha sabne us taraf se koyi halchal nahi hui..yani wo goli ki pahunch se door hain..yani bahut door hain..lekin jyada der nahi..wo teji se balladonna ki taraf badh rahe hain..wo ise tabah kar denge koyi zinda nahi bachega..sivay mere,." seth ,Ron ko rokte hue bola..."ek minut ,tumne khud ko samajh kya rakha hain..ki sivay tumhare koyi nahi bachega..jab balladonna hi khatam ho jayega toh tu kya samundar tair kar paar karega...bevkoof...." "captain ye sawal yadi mujhse puchhne ki bajay Riya se puchha hota toh jyada behtar hota..kyun janeman..aur rahi baat meri toh ek baat jaan lo Captain Seth, Ron us shaks ka nam hain,jo samundar se tairti hui ek chhoti si machhali ko dekhkar uski chal bata sakta hain...ummid hain tum sabko kuch samajh nahi aaya hoga  "sabhi ko kisi ki awaj sunayi deti hain..sabhi apne aas pass dekhte hain.. "Riya-awaj shayad neeche se aa rahi hain..jaldi dekho kahi koyi gir gaya kya.. ship me maujood kuch log bhag kar ship ke kinare pe lage rod ko pakadkar neeche dekhne lage... "are ye toh apne Captain Nair hain..par Captain Nair ke sath ye do namoone kaun hain..." Nair naav me baitha baitha hans diya..Aditya ko ye baat khatak gayi.. "sale namoona hoga tera baap..main Captain Aditya hoon..." "Captain Nair-iski baat ka bura mat jana..hume upar lane ka koyi intezam karo... Captain Nair ki awaj tab tak Riya,Ron aur seth ke kano me bhi pad chuki thi..teeno waha aa gaye...Ron Captain Nair ko dekhkar pichhe hat gaya.. "ye kaha se aa gaya..ab ye sabko bata dega ki maine hi ise jahaj se giraya tha..upar se ye dragons pichhe padae hue hain" "ship ki speed kam karo..Captain Nair ko upar lana hain..." Riya ne un teeno ko dekha Aditya ko jab usne dekha toh use yakin hi nahi hua..usne confirm karne ke liye Aditya ki taraf ungali se ishara karte hue boli.."tum Captain Aditya ho kya,..." "Riya mam aap yaha kya kar rahi hain..." "Riya- Aditya...sorry sorry Captain Aditya..tum zinda ho jaankar bahut khushi hui..ship ki speep ko kam karo... "Ron-riya,jahaj ki speed ko kam mat karo..dragon bahut karib aa chuke hain... "Riya-Ron,teri toh koyi baat main manungi nahi aur mere dono khoye hue Captain mil gaye..upar se ek ship me alredy maujood hain..ab jis jahaj pe teen Captain ho uska koyi kya bigad sakta hain...mujhe maloom hota ki Captain Aditya mil jayega toh main tujhe yaha kabhi nahi lati..ab apna mu band karke khisak le... "Ron-janeman ,tumhe maloom nahi hoga,isliye bata deta hoon..jis jahaj me teen teen Captain ho ,wo jahaj teen disha me jayegi,nateeza ye hoga ki tumhara ye balladonna apne akhiri padav par hain... Balladonna ki speed kam ho gayi..sabhi ne badi mehnat se teeno ko upar khincha... "Raaj- meri naav ko bhi upar khinch lo...baad me kaam aayegi.. "welcome Captain Aditya and Captain Nair....mujhe aap dono se bahut kuch puchhna hain..lekin abhi aap dono aaram kijiye..." "Captain Nair-mam,main Balladonna ka captain hoon..mujhe aram nahi karna un samundari danavo ka hamla hone wala hain.. Aditya aram karne ja raha tha ,lekin phhir uske andar se awaj aayi ki jab Captain Nair nahi thaka hain toh phhir toh Captain Aditya ki baat hi alag hain..Captain Aditya bhi riya ki taraf badhaya..."mam,actually mujhe bhi thakan nahi hain..ab bhale hi mera ship doob gaya ho..lekin main bhi toh ek Captain hi hoon na..." "Riya-mujhe tum dono ki lagan dekhkar khusi hui...lekin Captain Aditya tumhare sath kya hua tha..ekdum achanak tumhara connection humse kat gaya tha... "Aditya-mam..hum Atlantic ocean ko laghbhag paar chuke the ,aur devils traingle start hone wala tha..tabhi dragons ne humate ship pat attack kar diya,,mam unhone pure ship ko dubo diya..ek adhabhud taqat hain in dragons ke pass..Aditya phhir Raaj ki taraf ishara karte hue bola..."mam isne meri jaan bachayi samundar ke baare me bahut kuch janta hain..." Riya ne Raaj ko upar se neeche tak dekha.."ladka kaam ka lagta hain...Seth isko kaam samjha do..." Riya waha se jane lagi lekin Captain Nair ne riya ko rok liya... "mam,wo jungali kaha hain...apka chaheta The Ron..." "tum uske baare me kyun puchh rahe ho..." "mam,main use zinda nahi chhodunga usi ki vajah se main is samundar me gira tha,,ya phhir kahe ki us namurad jungali ne mujhe balladonna se neeche giraya tha..." Riya aur seth ki cheenkh nikal gayi.. "Riya-kya Ron ne tumhe is samundar me giraya tha..  Ron apni bandook liye hue bahar aata hain..."kaise ho Captain Nair bahut yaad aayi teri..tune bhi mujhe bahut yaad kiya hoga..kyun.." "Nair-seth la ghu de,abhi sale ki khopdi ko uda deta hoon bahut bak bak karta hain... "Ron-mujhe maaf karna darling ,par abhi tujhe mujh par goli chalane ke bajay ....Ron chup ho gaya aur apni bandook ko mu pichhe ki taraf kiya..."toh main ye bol raha tha ki abhi is vaqt mujh par goli chalane ke bajaye yadi in dragons pe chalaoge toh jyada maja aayega ..."Ron itna bolkar apni bandook ko dag deta hain..ek bhayankar aag Ron ke bandook se nikal kar pichhe se aa rahe dragon ko apni chapet me le liya...dragon jalne laga...waa ship pe maujood sabhi logo ke dil ye bhayankar nazara dekh kar dahal gaye...dragon jalte hue waha aas pass kuch der udta raha ...kuch der baad dragon samundar me gir gaya... "Ron-mujhe samundar ka SHIKARI yun hi nahi kahte........continue...........
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#128
3rd August 2012
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#129
3rd August 2012
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Kya mast update hai bhai .... AWESOME bro.
Kya kahu is updt ke barrae me koi sabd hi nahi hai mere pass. So  AB Balladonna ship pr 3 Captain or 2 SAMUNDRA ka SHIKARI. AB to ye ship dragons se jarror bach jaiga. Ron ke barre me kya kahu, wo sahi me SAMUNDRA ka SHIKARI hai. AGAIN  for a very nice Update.
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#130
3rd August 2012
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Mast update diya bhai. Ab nair ron ko nahi chhodega
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