[I_am_the_best]

for new story,

[I_am_the_best]

first update padha,ek tej shuruat di hain ,maja aaya aage bhi isi lay ko barkarar rakhne
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[itspwk]

Ron,is samundar ki gahrayi se aaj tak koyi bach ke nahi nikal paya..is gahrayi ke aage maut ki gahrayi bhi kam pad jaye..aaj is samundar ke khooni bavandar me ship me maujod har shaks marega...
Ron-tum chinta mat karo jan,main is khooni bawandar se nipat lunga..tum sab ke sath ship ko leke aage badho..samundar ke shikari ko samundar dooba nahi sakta..bas mera name yaad rakhna......THE RON!

Nice prolouge bhai.....

update raat main padunga.......

[Mehakdeep kaur]

its a nice story.. keep updating dear..
to you

[CHAMP ARYAN]

super first update bro....first update me hi aapne bahot kuch cover kar diya...
samundar ka tufan ka varnan se leke boat ka mahol aur apne hero ron ki entry....

very good start bro...keep it up..

[itspwk]

"Captain,hum shayad devils traingle ke pass pahunch gaye hain.."

"ye kaisa tharki captain diya hain,jab dekho tab ship me maujood ladkiyo ke sath maje karta rahta hain..aur hume yaha khada karke rakhwali karwata hain..sala tharki.."

Tharki captain... kya hoga is jahaj ka..... ab to is jahaj ka tharki Oops... bhagwan rakhwala hai...

Nice start.... lag raha hai kafi suspence... sex... aur thriller se bhari hui story hai....

futher

[itspwk]

"pahunch gaye,itni jaldi..chal samne se hat.."

faale tere ko to jaldi hi lagega.... mast items ke saath jo laga hua hai..

"abe ship ko kyun rokega..apni ye gatayan jaisi ankho se dekhta rah,koyi khatra dikhe toh phhir se awaj dena..main aata hoon kaam adhura chhut gaya tha.."

ekdum bhai... jahaj beshak doob jaaye... per KAAM kabhi adhora nhi chhodna chhiye....

[I_am_the_best]

waiting for update dear

[itspwk]

pad liya.....bahut hi achha update tha....

Lagta hai kaafi maja aane waala hai....

for next

[itspwk]

pad liya.....bahut hi achha update tha....

Lagta hai kaafi maja aane waala hai....

for next