[azhagan54]

The story line appears to be faulty.
The narrator has said that the pathetic woman becomes an got a job in a very big firm and was appointed the general manager and was earning 40,000 bucks monthly.......By then she got a sort of scholarship from the company she works for to follow a certain course abroad…. She went to UK FOR TWO YEARS…again studies!!
With the extent of exposure she got , she should have developed thecapabilities of independent thinking about her life and career.Inspite of such experiences , the story line states that she she could not decide about bringing up a family of her own.That is impossible even if the story had taken place medieval period.
She would have either forced her parents to get her married or she should have taken things under control.
In thabsence of both the heroine of the story is apathetic.This is logically not possible.Perhaps the story writer can draw sympathies but in real life such things wil not take place unless the heroine is haveing some physical or mental problems

[Casinar]

Originally Posted by azhagan54

The story line appears to be faulty.
The narrator has said that the pathetic woman becomes an got a job in a very big firm and was appointed the general manager and was earning 40,000 bucks monthly.......By then she got a sort of scholarship from the company she works for to follow a certain course abroad…. She went to UK FOR TWO YEARS…again studies!!
With the extent of exposure she got , she should have developed thecapabilities of independent thinking about her life and career.Inspite of such experiences , the story line states that she she could not decide about bringing up a family of her own.That is impossible even if the story had taken place medieval period.
She would have either forced her parents to get her married or she should have taken things under control.
In thabsence of both the heroine of the story is apathetic.This is logically not possible.Perhaps the story writer can draw sympathies but in real life such things wil not take place unless the heroine is haveing some physical or mental problems

thank you very much for the critical view my friend. but the answer of your queries are found in these lines which you may be did not pay heed while reading, in fact she became apathetic due to the situations surrounding her!

"so it was at this moment that they talked marriage with her… and the proposals were no longer available!! The parents now started looking for an ideal pair!! Now they were aiming for a son in law who will be earning over the 50,000 than the daughter!!... The perfect match was it there??
They got boys over the age of 45 for a girl who was reaching her 35!!!.... Did they think that there will be a boy in the twenties who will be waiting for Vijaya??
Vijaya had hardened herself so much that she told herself she will never get married now as she was happy with what she had!!"

Thanks Dude for reading my story.

[nevercame]

rep you

[forher]

Originally Posted by nevercame

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tum ne rep kiya ...

[Shakespeare002]

One of the best stories ever read

[pokhat]

national award winning art movie story

[forher]

Originally Posted by pokhat

national award winning art movie story

[Casinar]

Originally Posted by agyaat

casinar bhai
nice story,

Thank you agyaat bhai, am happy you liked it dear

[Casinar]

Originally Posted by nevercame

rep you

THANK YOU DEAR

[Casinar]

Originally Posted by forher

tum ne rep kiya ...

i ASK MYSELF?!