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[Casinar]

Originally Posted by mertysdt

you are very bad poet Mr.casinar sir.

oh really??

how come??

i am just LEARNING SIR!!

please teach me poetry, will you?

[Casinar]

Originally Posted by racecar

Ok mr ca sinner make this short and sweet.I f you dont come out with a better copy paste poem................................ Have you published any?

copy paste??

i did not really get you here...

not i did not publish...will you do that for me?

[racecar]

[quote=Casinar;18521837]copy paste??

i did not really get you here...

not i did not publish...will you do that for me?[/quote]

And get my ass kicked?

[Casinar]

[quote=racecar;18521952]

Originally Posted by Casinar

copy paste??

i did not really get you here...

not i did not publish...will you do that for me?[/quote]

And get my ass kicked?

like this??

[racecar]

[quote=Casinar;18522013]

Originally Posted by racecar

like this??

You kicked me after reading your own poem.Is it sooooo bad?

[herald23]

Originally Posted by Casinar

Friends in this thread I will share some poems which are written by me, not copied from anywhere, all wordings created by me and me only.
Hope lovers of poems will enjoy and appreciate.
Thanks all.



This is the first ever poem I wrote on 10th December 2007.

Thinking of her

How can I forget the way you smiled, the way you talked with the eyes
Your sweet voice still is alive in my ears, though today you stay so far from the eyes

I can still smell you in my breath, and feel your warmth on my chest
The moments we spent lying over each other on the grass were the best

You will be my bride you had vowed, on the sunny day in my arm
You will never part you promised,and wont cause me any harm

But today I am lonely once again,surrounded by your precious memories
You left when all alone I will be you knew well, and left for me here and there only worries

A baby you will give me as a token you had promised
The days our body were two in fact but in one soul
What I got in your love and what was it that I missed
My brain I find in a turmoil when I go through the days we kissed

I still long for the moment I enlaced you, your breast with my breast collated
The warmth of your heavy breath feel I still over my cheeks and neck
The kisses which were at first tender
And became passionate, sensual and desiring later

The curves of your body, I admired like in a dream
The touch of yours which rendered me supreme

Your heartbeats which were counted only for me
And my every breath which were taken only for you
Never shall I ever forget whatsoever happens to me
You were, are, and will be what you were for me

Will you ever be in my arms, to quench the thirst of this heart?
Will I ever see you again before I leave this world to part??

Written by Shah Khan of Mauritius (Casinar)

[rajveer123]

casinar bhai critics always make our work to improve

i know u r good and don't worry about those critics

[Imwild2008]

[Imwild2008]

nts for you