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#91
16th September 2010
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great work sager bhai maza aa gaya
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#92
16th September 2010
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hann tu dostoo!!
main ne abhi tak jitni storry likhi thi wo post kar dee hai. aap log mere bare me aisa mat sochoo . kay main bila waja aap ko tang karne k liye late updates dene ka soch raha hoon . aur dostoo mujhay SHAHAB se compare mat karo SHAHAB bhai ne jitni storry 3 saloon main post key thee itni main ne 3 din me post kar dee hai. late sirf iss liye howa k mujhe likhne ka time buhut kam milta hai . main ne apne business ko bhi dekhna hai . aur phir yea storry likhne k liye privacy bhi chaheyea hoty hai . likhne bethta hoon tu bache aas pass hoon tu concentrate nahi kar sakta storry pe. aur main nahi chahata k storry ka jo image hai wo kharab ho . main isee mazedar se maze dar tareen bana dena chahata hoon . aap logoo ko bataya hai main koi profesional writer tu hoon nahi bus wese he aik english storry ki translation shru ki thee tu wo pata nahi kia se kia ban gai aur ab tu mujhe bhi iss storry ko likhne me maza aane laga hai . meri koshish tu yea he ho gee k main isse adhura na chhorron . lekin please main aap se thoora time chahata hoon k main sakoon se likh k phir barri sari post kia karoon ta k aap ko bhi parhne me maza aaye. bus aik request hai k apne comments dete rahain . aur koshish karain comments zara detailed hoon jese NISHA_KHAN aur A GOOD FRIEND and POSCES R18 waghera k thhay. aap logoon k comments se hosla barhta hai aur mehenat se likhne ka dil chahata hai aur rply na hoon tu banda wese he dis heart ho jata hai k hum itni mehnat kar rahe hain aur koi faida he nahi..
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#93
16th September 2010
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very good work carry on friend
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#94
16th September 2010
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Yaar sagar meinne ab tak jitni bhi stories perhi hain yeh un mein sab se different or aap ne shuru mein jis tarah kaha tha k aap k ander jo salaheat chuppi hui thi to aap ne us ko khoob andaz se ubhara or peesh kia hai. update ka intezar hai.
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#95
16th September 2010
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well bahut achchi story hai khashtour par isme seduction bharpur hai jo sexy story ke liye bahut jaruri hai ha ek kami thodi si lagti hai wo hai font ka sayad bahut bade font me likh rahe ho
good story
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#96
17th September 2010
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i will update my storry soon
please comments dete rahain
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#98
18th September 2010
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We want more .... faster updates ... bigger updates .. can't bear the suspense ..
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#99
18th September 2010
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dude where are updates speed up them
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#100
18th September 2010
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 dostoo aap sub kay rply ka buhut buhut shukria ..next part taqreebun complete ho he gaya hai . bus jo kasar baqi hai uss pe aik nazar marr loon. mery koshish ho gee k main aaj he next part post kar doon . lekin agar aaj nahi bhi kar saka tu kal tu lazmy post karoon ga he . aik dafa phir storry passand karne pe thanks kehta hoon aap ka bhai SAGAR
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