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Padmini rajaayi mein dubak kar chupchaap baithi thi. Aisi haalat mein ushe neend aana naamumkin tha. ushe bas subah hone ka intezaar tha.

“hey bhagwaan kishi tarah se ye raat beet jaaye. Na jaane kishka muh dekha tha subah.”

“madam ek baat bataana bhul gaya.” Mohit ne achaanak kaha.

Padmini jo ki apni soch mein dubi thi achaanak mohit ki awaaj shun kar chonk gayi.

“kya hai ab?”

“tumhaari daayi taraf parde ke peeche toilet hai…”

“theek hai…theek hai”

“mujhe laga tumhe bata dun... kahin tum pareshaan raho.”

“theek hai…tum sho jao”

“vaise sach kahun to mujhe bhi neend nahi aa rahi.”

“kyon tumhe kya huva hai…tumhe to khus hona chaahiye aaj. Tumhaara badla jo pura ho gaya.”

“bahut acha dost tha vikas mera.”

“kaun vikas?”

“vahi jishne tumhaari car rukvaayi thi.”

“ushke parivaar mein kaun-kaun hai.”

“ushka chota bhai hai aur ma hai. Ushke bapu ka bahut pahle dehaant ho gaya tha. shaadi abhi tak ushki huyi nahi thi. Badi mushklil se maana tha mera saath den ke liye. Aakhir tak mujhe samjhaata raha ki soch lo…mujhe ye sab theek nahi lag raha”

“par tumpe to mujhse badla lene ka bhut sawaar tha hai na.” padmini ne kaha.

“theek hai jo ho gaya sho gaya…par mujhe vikas ke liye bahut dukh hai.”

“mujhe bas subah hone ka intezaar hai.”




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idhar raju apne kamre mein vaapis aa jaata hai.

“guru nahi aayega…vo thaka huva hai…”

“to main kaun sa ushe bula rahi thi…tum hi chaahte the ushe bulaana.” Nagma ne kaha.

“kyon ache se nahi maari thi kya gaand guru ne tumhaari peechli baar jo aise kah rahi ho.”

“mujhe bahut dard huva tha raju…ishiliye to main dubaara vaha se nahi karungi…”

“ye khub kaha…tu meri girl friend hai…guru ko to gaand de di…mujhe dene se mana kar rahi hai.”

“tum hi laaye the ush din ushe varna main kabhi nahi hone deti aisa…”

“chal chhod ye sab aa na ghum ja…aaj bahut man kar raha hai gaand maarne ka, dekhun to sahi ki ishme kaisa maja aata hai.” Raju ne nagma ke chutado par haath rakh kar kaha.

“aage se karo na…vaha aisa kuch alag nahi hai.” Nagma ne kaha.

“mujhe ek baar taste to kar lene de…”

“nahi mujhe dard hota hai vaha.”

“kuch nahi hoga…main guru se seekh kar aaya hun.”

“kya seekh kar aaye ho.”

“yahi ki gaand kaise maarni hai.”

“mujhe nahi karna ye sab…aage se karte ho to theek hai varna main chali…mujhe subah bahut kaam dekhne hain…late ho rahi hun.”

“tu to kahti thi ki saari raat rahegi mere saath.”

“to tumne kaun sa bataaya tha ki tum ye sab karoge…”

“to tumne guru ko kyon daalne diya tha gaand mein”

“vo ushne mujhe baato mein phansa liya tha bas…varna mera koyi iraada nahi tha.”

“hmm…yaar aise mat tadpa maan ja na.” raju ne nagma ko baahon mein bhar ke kaha.

“theek hai ek shart par…dubaara nahi karungi…ye pahli aur aakhri baar hoga.”

“theek hai manjoor hai mujhe…” raju ne hans kar kaha. Ushki aankho mein chamak aa gayi thi.

Nagma jo ki puri tarah nangi thi ulti ghum kar pet ke bal late gayi.

“aise nahi…kutiya ban jao…gaand maarne ka maja kutta-kutti ban kar hi aayega.”

Nagma ne position le li aur boli, “bho-bho”

“ye kya hai…”

“tumhi to kah rahe the kutiya ban jao…ab tum bhi kutte ki tarah hi karna ok…” nagma ne hans kar kaha.

“vah yaar kya idea hai…tu sach mein hot item hai…maja aayega teri gaand maar kar.”

“ab maarega bhi ya bakwaas hi karta rahega, mera mud badal gaya to main kuch nahi karne dungi.”

“ok…ok…bas daal raha hun…vo main guru ki bataayi baate soch raha tha. ushne mujhe bataaya tha ki kaise karna hai.”

“guru ko chhodo…ushne bahut dard kiya tha mujhe…tum apne deemag se kaam lo…araam se dheere se daalo.”

“arey haan yahi to guru bhi kah raha tha…acha aisa karo dono haatho se apni gaand ke putho ko fhaila lo, lund ko ander jaane mein asaani hogi.” Raju ne apne lund par thuk ragadte huve kaha.

“thoda sa mere vaha bhi thuk laga dena…” nagma ne sar ghuma kar kaha aur apne chutado ko raju ke lund ke liye faila liya.

“haan-haan laga raha hun pahle apne hathiyaar ko to chikna kar lu. Chinta mat kar teri gaand ko chikni karke hi maarunga.” Raju ne bahke-bahke andaaj mein kaha.

“vaise tumhe aaj ye sab karne ka bhut kaise sawaar ho gaya.”

“guru ne mujhe bataaya tha ki ushe teri gaand maar ke bada maja aaya tha. Tabhi se main bhi lene ko tadap raha tha.” raju ne jawaab diya.

“vaise mujhe jyada maja nahi aaya tha.”

“koyi baat nahi ab aayega maja tujhe.” Raju ne kaha

Raju ne nagma ke hole par dher saara thuk gira diya aur ush par apne lund ko ragadne laga.

“aah… dheere se daalna…” nagma sihar uthi.

“abhi to tere ched ko chikna kar raha hun. Chinta mat kar dheere-dheere hi ander daalunga.” Raju ne kaha.

Nagma ki gaand ko ache se chikna karne ke baad raju ne apne lund ko nagma ki gaand par taan diya. Jaisi ki kishi ke sar pe bandook rakhte hain.

“main aa rahun hun tumhaare ander.” Raju ne kaha aur apne lund ko halka sa dhakka diya.

“ooooyiii ma mar gayi…nikaalo ishe baahar mujhse nahi hoga.”

Khel bigadta dekh raju ne apne lund ko pura ka pura nagma ki gaand mein dhakel diya. “agar baahar nikaalna hi hai to pura daal kar nikaalunga. Ek baar ache se gaand mein lund daalne ka maja to le lu” raju ne khud se man hi man kaha.

“nahiiiiii ye kya kar rahe ho raju…nikaalo ishe main mar jaaungi…tumne to ekdam se pura daal diya.”

“sorry nagma…vo lund chikna hone ke kaaran khud-ba-khud ander phisal gaya.”

“jhut bol rahe ho tum…tum to apne guru ke bhi baap niklne…nikaalo varna main phir kabhi tumhaare paas nahi aaungi.”

“acha thoda ruko to sahi…mujhe theek se ahsaas to hone de ki main teri gaand ke ander hun.”

“tere ahsaas ke chakkar mein main mar jaaungi.”

“aisa kuch nahi hoga dheeraj rakho…” raju ne nagma ke sar par hath phira kar kaha.

Nagma chatpataati rahi par raju ne apne lund ko baahar nahi nikaala.

Kuch der baad nagma ka dard kam ho gaya aur vo boli, “tum bahut kharaab ho.”

“araam hai na ab.”

“haan…par main tumhe karne nahi dungi…nikaalo baahar,.”

“theek hai jaisi tumhaari masrji.”

Raju ne apna lund nagma ki gaand ki gahraayi se baahar ki taraf kheencha. Lekin ish se pahle ki vo pura baahar aa pata ek jhatke mein ushe pura ka pura phir se ander dhakel diya. Raju ke aand nagma ki gaand par ja kar sat gaye.

“ooohhhyyiii….tum nahi maanoge.”

“bilkul nahi…bade din se tammanna thi teri gaand maarne ki. Aaj ache se maar kar hi dam lunga.”

“aahhh…dheere se maaro na phir…tum to jor se daal rahe ho.” Nagma ne kaha

“kya karun control hi nahi hota.”


“aage se tumhaare paas nahi aaungi main.” Nagma ne gusse mein kaha.

“sorry baba galti ho gayi…ab main dheere-dheere karunga.”

Raju dheere-dhjeere apna lund nagma ki gaand mein ragadata raha. Kuch hi der mein dono ki saanse phoolne lagi. Aur raju ke dhakko ki speed khud-ba-khud tej hoti chali gayi.

“sorry ab dheere se karna muskil ho raha hai…bahut maja aa raha hai…kya kahti ho… bana tu toofan mail tumhaari gaand ko.”

“theek hai par jaldi khatam karna mujhse saha nahi ja raha.”

Raju ne apne dhakke tej kar diye…vo apne charam ke karib tha. koyi 2 minute tej-tej dhakke maarne ke baad vo nagma ki gaand mein jhad gaya.

“Aaaahhh maja gaya kasam se…gure theek kahta tha…teri gaand badsi mast hai.”

“hato ab…mujhe letna hai…thak gayi hun ish position mein.”

Raju bahut khus tha aakhir ushki muraad jo puri ho gayi thi…..


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Padmini abhi bhi jaag rahi hai. Raat ke 2:30 ho gaye hain.

Par mohit ke kharanto ki gunj pure kamre mein gunj rahi hai.

“kambakhat mujhe musibat mein phansa kar khud chain se sho raha hai"






Here comes the end of first chapter…………………….

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jaise-jaise raat beet rahi thi padmini man hi man raahat ki saans le rahi thi. 4 bajne ko the. Kamre mein abhhi bhi mohit ke kharanto ki awaaj gunj rahi thi. Padmini raat bhar aankhe khole baithi rahi. Bhul kar bhi ushki aankh nahi lagi. Jaise har bura sapna beet jaata hai ye raat bhi beet hi rahi thi. Kab 5 baj gaye pata hi nahi chala.

'kya mujhe chalna chaahiye...par sardi ka vakt hai sadke abhi bhi shunsaan hi hongi. Mujhe 6 bajne tak wait karna chaahiye. Ush vakt shaayad koyi auto mil jaaye. Jaha itna wait kiya thoda aur sahi.' padmini ne socha.

Achaanak kamre ka darvaaja jor-jor se khadakne laga. Mohit gahri neend mein tha ushe kuch shunaayi nahi diya. 'kaun ho sakta hai...mujhe kya lena hoga koyi mohit ki pahchaan wala...par mohit uth kyon nahi raha' padmini ne socha.


Darvaaja lagataar khadakta raha. Jab mohit nahi utha to padmini ne bed se uth kar ushe hilaaya.

'utho baahar koyi hai...lagataar darvaaja khadak raha hai tumhe shunaayi nahi deta kya.' padmini ne mohit ko hilaate huve kaha.

'k...kaun hai' mohit uthte hi hadbadahat mein bola.

'main hu...darvaaja kholo koyi kab se khadka raha hai'


'kya time huva hai'

'5 baj kar 5 minute ho rahe hain'

'itni subah-subah kaun aa gaya'

mohit ne pahle ki tarah light band karke darvaaja khola. Padmini ish baar toilet mein chali gayi.

'raju tu itni subah kya kar raha hai. Bataaya tha na raat maine tujhe ki main thaka huva hun'

'sorry guru baat hi kuch aisi thi ki mujhe aana pada.' raju ne kaha

'kya huva ab nahi di kya nagma ne gaand tujhe'

'guru majaak ki baat nahi hai...bahut serious baat hai...mujhe ander to aane do'

'kya baat hai yaar tu itna dara huva kyon hai'

'jab tumhe pata chalega to tumhaari bhi meri jaisi haalat ho jaayegi'


'yaar paheliya mat bujha saaf-saaf bata ki baat kya hai' mohit ne kaha.

Toilet mein padmini bhi sab kuch badi utsukta se shun rahi thi. Ushe lag gaya tha ki koyi gambhir baat hai. Pahle to ushne socha ki mujhe kya lena dena lekin phir utsukta ke kaaran unki baate shun-ne lagi.

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'yaar abhi thodi der pahle mein nagma ko ghar chhod kar jab vaapis aaya to maine yu hi tv on karke dekha'

'kya dekha tv mein'

'yaar tera vo dost hai na vikas'

mohit samajh gaya ki tv par vikas ke katal ki khabar aa rahi hogi par ushne anjaan ban-ne ki koshis ki.

'kya huva vikas ko'

'guru vo serial killer ke haatho maara gaya'

'kya aisa nahi ho sakta'

'sach kah raha hun tum khud tv chala kar dekh lo...par vo kamini bachegi nahi' raju ne kaha.

'kya matlab...ye kamini kaun hai.'

'aur kaun, vahi jishne vikas ko maara hai. Ye serial killer jishne dehradun mein khauf macha rakha hai koyi aadmi nahi aurat hai. Vo bhi khubsurat. Yakin nahi aata to tv chala kar dekh lo'

ye sab shun kar padmini ke hosh ud gaye. Ushe purvabhaas ho raha tha ki ho na ho jish aurat ki baat raju kar raha hai vo, vo khud hai. Mohit bhi utna hi surprised tha. Ushne foran tv on kiya.

'kish channel par aa rahi hai khabar' mohit ne pucha.

'koyi bhi channel laga lo har kishi pe yahi khabar hai.

Mohit ne aaj tak channel laga liya. Ush par vaakayi vahi khabar chal rahi thi.

'dhyaan se dekhiye is khubsurat chehre ko yahi hai vo jishne dehradun mein khauf faila rakha hai' news anchor cheella-cheella kar bol raha tha.

vo chehra kishi aur ka nahi padmini ka tha.

'raju tu ja...hum baad mein baat karenge'

'kya huva guru'

'kuch nahi main vikaas ki maut ke kaaran dukhi hu tum jao abhi baad mein baat karenge.

'theek hai...mujhe bhi bahut dukh huva ye news dekh kar. Pata nahi vikas ke ghar walo ka kya haal hoga bhagvaan ushki aatma ko shaanti de aur ish kaatil hasina ko maut ka fanda'

'theek hai-theek hai jao ab....'

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