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'mere saath jo kuch bhi ho raha hai ushke liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi' padmini ne kaha

'dekho mujhe nahi pata tha ki baat itni badh jaayegi'

'tumhaari bevkoofi ki saja mujhe mil rahi hai'

'shaayad kishmat hamein saath rakhna chaahti hai ishiliye ye sab khel ho raha hai. Tumhaare aane se ish ghar mein ronak si hai. Mujhe tumhaara saath bahut acha lag raha hai'

'yaha meri jaan par ban aayi hai aur tumhe ye behuda flirt sujh raha hai, sharam nahi aati tumhe aisi baate karte huve'

tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho, mera kahne ka matlab ye tha ki hamein mil kar ish musibat ka saamna karna hoga'

'main jab tak tumhaare saath rahungi kishi na kishi musibat mein phansi rahungi. Mujhe jald se jald yaha se nikalna hoga' padmini dheere se badbadaayi.

'kuch kaha tumne'

'haan yahi ki main ja rahi hun'

'tumne shuna nahi charo taraf police dhund rahi hai tumhe. Aise mein kaise baahar niklogi'

'kuch bhi ho mujhe jaana hi hoga'

tabhi phir se darvaaja khadakne laga.

'raju hi hoga...chaaye laaya hoga mere liye' mohit ne kaha.

'theek hai ushe jaldi rafa dafa karna...mujhe ghar ke liye nikalna hai' padmini ye kah kar toilet mein aa gayi.

Mohit ne darvaaja khola. Raju hi tha. Ushke haath mein 2 cup chaaye thi.

'guru aaj mast chaaye banaayi hai'

'acha aisa kya kar diya'

'ilaaychi daali hai guru...nagma laayi thi kal'

'theek hai tu ja...main chaaye pi lunga'

'guru baat kya hai...baar-baar mujhe yaha se nikaal dete ho'

'kuch nahi raju...tu nahi samjhega'

'tumhaara mud theek karne ke liye kuch dilchasp baat karun'

'baad mein bataana nagma ki baat, abhi nahi'

'par main to kuch aur hi kah raha tha...haan nagma ki baat se yaad aaya...guru kar li fatah maine ushki gaand. Bahut maja aaya gaand maar ke, sach mein. Tum sach kahte the mast gaand hai ushki. Ek-ek dhakke mein vo maja tha ki kah nahi sakta...'

toilet mein padmini ko sab shun raha tha. 'in kamino ko aur koyi kaam nahi hai, har vakt yahi sab' padmini ne socha.

'vaise tu kuch aur kya kahne wala tha?' mohit ne pucha.

'vo haan...guru dekhi tumne news puri'

'haan dekh li'

'vishwaas nahi hota na ki itni hasin ladki kaatil bhi ho sakti hai'

'haan yaar yakin nahi hota par tv par deekha to rahe hain' mohit ko pata tha ki padmini shun rahi hogi ishliye ushne yu hi chuski li.

'mera to dil aa gaya ish kaatil hasina par'

chup kar deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hain' mohit ne kaha.

'shuno to sahi...main jab news dekh raha tha pahle to dar lag raha tha. Phir baar-baar ushe dekh kar lund khada ho gaya. Kaas mil jaaye ushki ek baar.'

'abey chup kar marvaayega kya' mohit ne kaha.

Padmini ka chehra gusse se laal ho gaya.

'sach kah raha hun guru agar ek baar maine ushki maar li na to vo saari raat mujhse marvaati rahegi aur ye raato ko khun karna band kar degi.' raju ne kaha.

'bahut ho gaya tu ja ab'

'guru raat bhar nagma se karne ke baad bhi subah tv par ish hasina ko dekh kar vo dil machla ki ruka nahi gaya...muth maar li maine'

'abey paagal ho gaya hai kya chal nikal yaha se'

'kya huva guru gussa kyon hote ho, main to bas...'

'ishe kahin mat jaane dena abhi bataati hun ishe main' toilet ke ander se padmini cheellayi.

'ye kaun cheellaya guru' raju hairat mein bola.

'maine kaha tha na deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hain' mohit ne kaha.

'haan par deewaro ke paas muh kab se aa gaya, cheellane ke liye' raju ne kaha.

Tabhi toilet ka darvaaja khol kar padmini baahar nikli.

Padmini ko dekhte hi raju ki upar ki saans upar aur niche ki saans neeche rah gayi. Ushke haath se chaaye ka cup gir gaya aur ushki taange thar thar kaanpne lagi.

'haan to phir se kaho kya kah rahe the mere baare mein'

'g...guru ye...' raju se kuch bhi bole nahi ban raha tha.

'abey kya kar raha hai, tera to moot nikal gaya...'

padmini bahut gusse mein thi lekin phir bhi raju ki aisi haalat dekh kar hanse bina na rah saki.

'bas nikal gayi saari hekdi...bahut baate karta hai...huh' padmini ne kaha.



To be continued.......................
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'ishe kahin mat jaane dena abhi bataati hun ishe main' toilet ke ander se padmini cheellayi.

'ye kaun cheellaya guru' raju hairat mein bola.

'maine kaha tha na deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hain' mohit ne kaha.

'haan par deewaro ke paas muh kab se aa gaya, cheellane ke liye' raju ne kaha.

Tabhi toilet ka darvaaja khol kar padmini baahar nikli.

Padmini ko dekhte hi raju ki upar ki saans upar aur niche ki saans neeche rah gayi. Ushke haath se chaaye ka cup gir gaya aur ushki taange thar thar kaanpne lagi.

'haan to phir se kaho kya kah rahe the mere baare mein'

'g...guru ye...' raju se kuch bhi bole nahi ban raha tha.

'abey kya kar raha hai, tera to moot nikal gaya...'

padmini bahut gusse mein thi lekin phir bhi raju ki aisi haalat dekh kar hanse bina na rah saki.

'bas nikal gayi saari hekdi...bahut baate karta hai...huh' padmini ne kaha.



To be continued.......................
Ha...haa...he...he...
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