[rohithot4u]

Originally Posted by amit8985

KYA STORY HAI YAAR... HATS OFF TO U MAN....
MAZA AA GAYA....
AISA LAG RAHA JAISE KOI FILM DEKH RAHE HAI....



WAITING FOR UPDATES....

thanks a lot amit. I am glad that u liked it.

Originally Posted by hitx

mind blowing thriller. excellent story . carry on.

thanks dear. Am happy that u liked it.

Originally Posted by Hotrocky11

Rohit bhai jabarjust kahani likhi hai .

thanks bhai...keep enjoying....

Originally Posted by helper0313

READ FIRST TIME THE WHOLE STORY






















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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODLUCK

thanks a lot dear. I am glad that u liked it

Originally Posted by super84

Rohit garam bhai, udhar Padmini ka dar se haalat kharab hai, idhar ham readers ka dam nikla ja raha hai ki ab kya hoga.

dhanyavaad bhai....thanks for ur support.

Originally Posted by brego4

good plot unfolding

thanks....ya plot unfolding...keep enjoying...

Originally Posted by friend_just_buddy

Excelent . Keep it up

thanks a lot buddy for ur constant support...

[binoykrishna]

your story is very nice....please keep it up...and koshish karo aur romantic and sexy banane ki.................

[hitx]

update pls

[rohithot4u]

will update tonight

[brego4]

hot going but updates are mall and irregular

[rohithot4u]

Subah ke 7 bajne ko hain. Hotel green palace mein ek khubsurat ladki room no 201 ki bell bajaati hai. Darvaaja khulta hai.

'good morning sir' ladki hans kar kahti hai.

'good morning...aao-aao main tumhaara hi intezaar kar raha tha, mera naam sanjay hai, what's your name?'

'ji muskaan'

'bahut shunder naam hai...bilkul tumhaari tarah...kuch chaaye-coffee logi' sanjay ne pucha.

'ji shukriya...main ghar se pi kar aayi hun'

'kya pi kar aayi ho'

'chaaye pi kar aayi hun'

'mujhe to yakin nahi tha ki itni subah mr kumar kishi ko bhej dega. Actually mere paas abhi vakt tha aur shaam ko mujhe nikalna hai. Bahut man ho raha tha. Itni shunder ladki bhejega kumar mujhe yakin nahi tha.'

'shukriya' ladki ne kaha.

'kish baat ke liye?'

'meri taarif ke liye'

sanjay ne muskaan ko upar se neeche tak dekha aur apne beg se 50,000 nikaal kar muskaan ke haath mein rakh diye aur bola,'ye lo tumhaari fees'

muskaan ne paise chupchaap purse mein rakh liye.

'Tum college girl ho na, maine mr kumar ko college girl ke liye bola tha'

'ji haan main college girl hun'

'kya karti ho college mein'

'kya matlab padhti hun'

'mera matlab b.a kar rahi ho ya b.com ya kuch aur'

'main b.a final mein hun'

'kab se ho ish line mein'

'ye mera pahla assignment hai' muskaan ne kaha.

'jo bhi mujhe milti hai yahi kahti hai' sanjay ne hanste huve kaha.

'sir, main dusro ka nahi jaanti lekin ye mera pahla hai'

'to kya virgin ho tum'

'nahi mera boy freind hai'

'ish line mein majboori se ho ya phir shonk se'

'jeendagi hai...main ish baare mein kuch nahi kahna chaahti' kahte kahte muskaan ki aankhe nam ho gayi thi. Par jaldi hi ushne khud ko sambhaal liya. Ye vaakyi mein ushka first time tha.

Sanjay khada ho kar muskaan ke saamne aa gaya aur bola,'acha chodo ye sab...chalo mere ganne ko baahar nikaal kar choosna shuru karo...bahut machal raha hai tumhaare muh mein jaane ke liye'

muskaan ne sanjay ki jeans ka botton khol kar chain neeche sarka di.

'aaahhh jaldi karo wait nahi hota'

muskaan ne ek haath se sanjay ke lund ko pakad kar baahar kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye vo lund ko nihaarti rahi.

'kaisa hai mera loda meri jaan, tere boy freind ke lund se bada hai kya jo aise dekh rahi ho'

'nahi bada to nahi hai...haan par ishka muh thoda mota hai'

'dekho bhai 50,000 diye hain maine ishka-ushka mat karo ishe naam se pukaaro.'

'aapke lund ka muh thoda mota hai'

'dhyaan se dekh saali...ye tere boy freind ki mungfali se bada hai'

muskaan samajh gayi ki ye aadmi thoda sanki hai vo turant boli,'haan-haan theek kaha bahut bada lund hai ye. Maine theek se nahi dekha tha.'

sanjay ne muskaan ke baal muthi mein bheench kar kaha,'aage se dhyaan rakhna samjhi'

'aahhh ji bilkul' muskaan ne karaah kar kaha.

'chal ab choos ish ganne ko aur bata ye meetha hai ki nahi'

'ji abhi chakh kar bataati hun'

'muskaan ne muh khola aur sanjay ke lund ko muh mein aadha le liya.

'tu shunder to hai par tujhe lund choosna nahi aata. Itni buri tarah se kishi ne aaj tak muh mein nahi liya mera lund.'

'ji ye mera pahli baar hai'

'kyon nahi choosti kya apne boy freind ka lund tu.'

'nahi.....'

'dekho maine pure paise diye hain mujhe ek dam mast blow job chaahiye. Main abhi apne laptop mein ek porn movie lagaata hun...ushmein jaise ladki choosti hai vaise hi choosna mera lund...ok.'

'ji...ok'



next update soon

[rohithot4u]

Originally Posted by brego4

hot going but updates are mall and irregular

thanks dear...mobile se update deta hun please bear with me.

[rohithot4u]

'Sir hamne pure sahar ki naakebandi kar rakhi hai...vo jaldi pakdi jaayegi'

'mujhe pal-pal ki report dete rahna vijay...bahut pressure hai upar se ish case mein'

'aap chinta na karein sir...case to solve ho hi chuka hai...vo bhi pakdi hi jaayegi'

'witness ke ghar par kitni protection bheji hai'

'sir 2 hawaldaar bheje hain'

'hmm...ush nakaab posh ka kuch pata chala ki vo kaun hai.'

'nahi sir abhi kuch pata nahi chala...par jald pata chal jaayega'

'theek hai meri jeep lagvaao, main pure sahar ka ek round lunga'

'ok sir...abhi lagvaata hun'

vijay sub inspector hai aur jishe vo sir-sir kah raha hai vo hai ranjeet chauhan, inspecor. Serial killer ka case ushi ke paas hai.

Achaanak vijay ka phone bajne lagta hai. Vo phone uthata hai.....phone par baat karne ke baad vo kahta hai,' sir 100 no par abhi-abhi kishi ne phone karke bataaya hai ki hotel green palace ke room no 201 mein chupi hai padmini arora'

'hmm main khud chalunga vaha...fauran jeep lagvaao'

'ok sir' kah kar vijay kamre se baahar aa jaata hai.

15 minute baad hotel green palace ka baahar police ki jeep rukti hai. Inspecto chauhan, sub inspector, vijay ko saath le kar hotel mein ghusta hai.

'room no 201 kidhar hai' inspector chauhan ne receptionist se pucha.

'kya baat hai sir?' receptionist ne pucha.

'saale abhi ander kar dunga...room dikha kaha hai' ek to inspector deekhne mein hi bhayaanak tha upar se ye rob...receptionist ki to haalat kharaab ho gayi.

'aao sir main khud aapko room tak le chalta hun'

'haan jaldi le chal' chauhan ne kaha.

Kuch der baad inspector chauhan vijay ke saath room no 201 ke baahar tha.

Room ke ander laptop par porn movie chal rahi hai aur maahol garam hai.

'dekho kaise choos rahi hai ye blond hapsi ka mota lund...dekhi hai aisi movie kabhi'

'nahi sir...'

'saali dekha kar...jab apni gaand tune bajaar mein utaar di hai to kuch skill to seekh...bahut kamaayegi agar meri baat maanegi to.'

'ok sir... main seekh lungi'

'abhi seekha kuch...'

'haan-haan bilkul.'

'chal phir choos mere lund ko...bilkul ushi tarah jaise movie mein vo hapsi ka choos rahi hai'

ladki ne badi saavdhani se sanjay ke lund ko pakda aur jaise movie mein deekhaya tha vaise muh mein lene ki koshis ki.

'aaahhh..... tu to seekh gayi...pakki randi ban jaayegi tu aaj'

tabhi room ki bell baj uthi.

'kaun aa gaya ish vakt...maine mana kiya tha ki disturb mat karna' sanjay badbadaaya.

[Rajtej]

Majedar story he bro

[friend_just_buddy]

Story ke beech me break like gobar on a cake. Likhate raho yaara bas , bahut majedaar story hai ye. Tc