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"koyi gadbad to nahi" ladki ne pucha.

"chinta mat kar, ye hotel bilkul safe hai...jaroor koyi bevkoof waiter hoga...tu movie par dhyaan laga...main abhi aata hun"

vo darvaaja kholta hai lekin police ko vaha paakar ushke pasine choot jaate hain.

"kya huva janaab...chehre ka rang kyon ud gaya hamein dekh kar" inspector chauhan ne kaha.

"kya baat hai sir?"

"tumhaare saath aur kaun-kaun hai!" chauhan ne pucha.

"meri fiance hai saath mere"

"kya naam hai ushka"

"ji mushkaan"

"hmm mushkaan, theek hai mujhe tumhaara room check karna hai" chauhan ne room mein ghuste huve kaha.

"par inspector saahab bataaye to sahi ki baat kya hai"

"thodi der mein sab pata chal jaayega jubaan band rakh" chauhan ne rob se kaha.

Inspector kamre mein aa gaya. ladki ne tab tak chehre par duppata lapet liya tha.

"hey ladki chehra deekha apna" chauhan ne pucha.

"kya baat hai sir!"

"shuna nahi...duppata hata muh se aur thobda deekha apna"

ladki ne duppata muh se hata liya.

"arey puja ji aap yaha...aap yaha kya kar rahi hain?"

"ji main apne fiance se milne aayii thi"

inspector ka maatha thanka. Ushne laptop mein jhaank kar dekha. Ushmein abhi bhi porn movie chal rahi thi. "hey tum mere saath baahar aao ek minute" chauhan ne sanjay se kaha.

"par baat kya hai inspector saahab" sanjay ne kaha

kamre se baahar aa kar chauhan ne kaha,"sach-sach bata kya rista hai tera ish ladki se"

"sir...vo meri fiance hai"

"acha kya karti hai teri fiance"

"vo b.a final mein hai"

"kaun se college mein"

"bhul gaya sir pata nahi"

"acha...chal ye bata kaha rahti hai teri fiance address to pata hoga tujhe ushka"

"aap ye sab kyon puch rahe hain"

tabhi chauhaan ne ek thappad rasid kar diya sanjay ke muh par. Thappad itni jor ka tha ki sanjay ka sar ghum gaya.

"ab sach bataata hai ya ke ek aur dun kaan ke niche"

"bataata hun-bataata hun sir...vo escort hai"

"kya kaha?" chauhan ko ish sach ki ummeed nahi thi. Vo to soch raha tha ki unka koyi illicit affaire hai.

"sach kah raha hun sir...vo ladki escort hai"

"tum kahaan se aaye ho"

"sir main delhi se aaya hun"

"kab aaye the yaha"

"main raat 12 baje aaya tha yaha"

"vijay..." chauhan ne vijay ko awaaj lagaayi jo ki kamre mein tha.

"ji sir" vijay fauran haajir ho gaya.

"ye ladki to vo nahi hai jishki hamein talaas thi...kamra ache se check kiya aur koyi to nahi hai ander" chauhaan ne kaha.

"nahi sir kamre mein aur koyi nahi hai...haan par kamre mein bed ke takiye ke neeche se ye chaaku mila hai" vijay ne kaha.

"itne bade chaaku ko takiye ke neeche rakh kar kya kar rahe the tum"

"ji vo main...main" sanjay ne haklaate huve kaha.

"kya main-main laga rakha hai...kya matlab hai aisa chaku rakhne ka"

"sir mere grah-nakshatra khraab chal rahe hai ushi ke upaaye ke liye main roj apne takiye ke neeche ye chaaku rakhta hun. Jyotishi ne bataaya tha."

"chote-mote chaaku se kaam nahi chalta tha tumhaara jo itna bada chaaku rakh liya" chauhan ne kaha.

"sir mujhe yahi pasand aaya...maine rakh liya"

"hmm....vijay ek minute idhar aao" chauhaan ne vijay ko kaha.

"ji sir" vijay ne kaha.

"tum ishe thaane ley jao aur dara dhamka kar chod dena. Aur haan 1 peti se kam mat lena. Jyada teen-paanch kare to ander daal dena" chauhan ne kaha.

"sir ek baat kahun agar bura na maane to" vijay ne kaha.

"haan-haan bolo"

"jish college girl ka katal huva tha uski freind hai na ye ladki"

"haan theek kaha vahi hai ye...tum ishe ley kar jao main yahi room mein rukunga" chauhan ne kaha.

"ji sir samajh gaya...sir sunder ladki hai... thoda hamaara bhi dhyaan...."

"pahle mujhe to ghodi chadne de..."

"ok sir samajh gaya...main fauran ish lafange ko lekar thaane pahunchta hun" vijay ne kaha.

"aur haan...ush padmini ka kuch bhi pata chale to fauran mujhe phone karna" chauhan ne kaha.



What happens next in room no 201.....complete detail with big update tomorrow.........:
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