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very nice story bro..

shuruat kafi achhi hui h..

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Chhote chaar number pana de. Gadi ke neeche lete hue shks ne usse kaha.

Chhote- abhi alaya guru.

Chhote ek xx saal ka ladka tha aur is Chote se garage me helper ka kaam karta Usne paas me pade hue pane ko uthaya aur is shks ko de diya. Wo shks khamoshi se apna kaam kar raha tha ki tabhi us Chote se garage me jhatke lete hue ek car dakhil hui aur band pad gai. Us car se do ladke aur 2 ladkiya utri utarte hi Pahle ladke ne chhote jo ki car parts ko petrol se dho raha usne kaha
Pahla ldka-Oye jaldi se Dekh car me Kya kharabi hai hume bahut door Jana Hai.

Chote-guru abhi busy hai time lagega

Pahla ladka - tune suna nahi hume jaldi nikalna hai.

Us ladke ne badi akad ke saath Chote se kaha.

Chote- Tune bhi to nhi suna ki guru busy hai.

Chhote ne bhi usi akad ke saath jawab diya.

Pahla ladka - Sale Teri toh.

Jane de Rishabh baccha Hai yar uske saath aye dusre ladke ne kaha.

Dusra ladka - Kaha tumhra guru Mai usse baat kar leta hu.

Dusre ladke ne chhote ke sar Pe pyar se hanth pherte hue kaha.

Chhote - wo raha magar sambhal ke guru disturbance pasand nahi Hai.

Chhote ne car ke neeche lete hue shks ki oor ishara karte hue kaha. Dusra ladka muskuraya aur car ki taraf bhad gaya.

Dusra ladka - Suniye plz humari help kar dijiye humari car kharab ho gai hai aur Hume jaldi nikalna hai.

Car ke neeche lete hue shks ne waise hi Lete hue Jawab diya. To tumhe Dikh nhi raha Mai busy hu.

Dusra ladka - Ji dikh toh raha par humra yaha se jaldi nikalna Bahut jaruri Warna hum late ho jayenge.

Car ke neeche lete hua shks-Kaha Ja rahe ho.

Dusra ladka - ji paas hi junglon me camping ke liye ja rahe Hai.

Wo shks car ke neeche se nikalta Hai (ye aur koi nahi wohi Hai jiska jikar kahani ki shuruat me Hua tha. ) aur us ladke ko ek nazar dekhta hai us ladke ke paseene chhot jate hai us shks ne Dekha hi isi andaz se tha magar wo use darana nahi chahta tha Dekha usne normally hi tha jaise wo sabhi ko dekhta magar anjan wyakti use dekhkar yahi sochega ki wo Gusse me Hai.

Shks - Gadi kaha gai.

Dusre ladke ne bina Kuch bole apni white Scorpio ki taraf ishara kiya wo Kuch dar sa gaya tha. Wo shks zameen se uthta hai aur car ki taraf bhad chalta hai peeche peeche wo ladka bhi Chal deta. Us shks ne Rishabh ki taraf dekha uska bhi hal uske sahi ki hi Tarah tha dono ladkiyan Kuch Dari si lag rahi thi us shks ne car bonat khola aur dekhne laga.

Shks - Kya Hua Tum log itna ghbra Kyu rahe ho kya baat hai kahi Kuch ulta seedha toh nhi kar ke aa rahe.

Us shks ne apni bhari awaj aur rookhepan ke saath kaha.

Pahli Ladki - nahi sir aisa Kuch nhi

Shks - toh baat Kya hai abhi Kuch der Pahle toh ye ladka chhote Pe akad Dikha raha tha Ab Kya hogya.

Us shks ne bonat me check karte usi Sur me kaha.

Chhote - are guru Maine inhe maaf kiya bacche Hai Galti ho jati Hai aur rahi baat darne ki Tum Kisi ko ek nazar dekh bhi lo toh uski Jan waise hi nikl jati ye log Kya cheez Hai.

Chhote ne majakiya laheje me kaha halanki Rishabh ko ye accha nhi laga.
Wo shks apna kaam karta raha kareeban 15 mints ke bad usne bonat se sar nikala aur kaha


Shks - battery discharge Hai aur pani bhi nahi Hai charge hone me time lagega.

Rishabh - Kitna tym lagega.

Shks- kareeb 2 se 3 ghante.

Dusra ladka - tab tak to raat ho jayega 3 toh baj hi rahe.

Ab hum kya karenge nidhi

Ek ladki me dusri se mayus hote hue kaha.

Nidhi - Ruk toh jara khamkha ghabrane lgti Hai.

Dusra ladka - Han bilkul ghabrane ki Kya baat hai yaha koi lauge ya hotel toh hoga hi.

Chhote - Yaha ye Sab Kuch nhi hai.

Kyaaa! Sbhi ne ek saath kaha

Dusri ladki- Ab hum Kya karenge Rohan

Usne Pahle ladke ki taraf dekhta hue kaha.

Rohan - sochne do toh jo log bahar se sate Hai wo kaha rukte Hai.

Rohan ne us shks se poocha Mgara usne koi jwab nhi diya wahi khamosh khada rha par chhote kaise chup rhta wo bola

Chhote - yaha koi nhi ata aur jo aate Hai unke yaha rishtedar hote ya khud ka ghar.

Rishabh - phas gye yar.

Chhote - ek kaam krte Hai Aap Gadi yahi chhod do aur jungle ki taraf paidal hi nikl lijiye wapas aate waqt Gadi utha lena.

Rohan - baat toh theek Hai magar Hume rasta nhi pta.

Chhote Kuch der sochta Hai aur phir us shks ki taraf dekhta hai Jo chhote ko Dekh rha tha wo janta tha ki chhote Kya Bolne wala Hai.

Shks - bilkul nahi Mai inhe kahi nhi leke Jane wala.

Usne usi rookhepan ke saath jawab diya

Chhote - Aap akele thodi na jaoge Mai toh chalunga apke saath plz man jao na guru ye humare mahmaan Hai aur mahmaan bhagwan saman hota aurr

shks- Bas Bas band kar apna dibba ek bar Bolna shuru kiya to bolte hi jata hai.

Chhote - toh man jao na plz Mujhe bhi jungle ki sair krni.

Shks - waha kaun Hai Tera Jo tu Mara Ja rha jane ko.

Chhote - koi ho chahe na wo mujhe jungle jana hai.

Chhote ne badi masumiyat se jid karte hue kaha aur Muh pher liya.

Shks - agar Sher kha gya toh.

Us shks ne chhote ko apni taraf mod ke kaha magar andaz wohi tha.

Chhote - tumhe kis liye apne saath rkha Tum Kisi Sher se kam ho kya.

Wo shks mudta Hai thodi door Jake kahta

Shks - Ja kamre me Mera saman le aa

Chhote khush ho jta aur kahta wo bag bhi lau kya

Shks - han

Bas itna hi kahta chhote khushi khushi Sara saman lene kamre ki oor chala jata hai.

Kya hoga jungle me us bag me Kya hai Kya ye shks wakai inki Madad krna chahta Janne ke liye saath bane rahiye.

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gajab update bro..

kahani mast bante jaa rahi h..

shiva ki entry dhansu hui h..

ab dekhte h.. ye log jungle
me kya karne wale h..

chote ka roll bahat pasand aaya
ho sake taw dono ko jyada se
jyada sath rakhna plss..

waiting for next update bro..
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Chhote saman leke Aa jta hai uske hanth me ek bada sa bag tha aur dusre hanth me double bullet wiski ki bottal thi wo haaf raha tha.

Chhote - ye raha tumhra bag guru (usne haafte hue kaha) pata nhi kya bhara Hai Isme kabhi khol bhi nahi dikhaya Mujhe toh

Shiva - jab wqt ayega toh khol ke bhi dikha dunga(shiva ne bag uthate hue kaha) Mai Gadi mikal kar leta hu jungle yaha se 10 kilometers door Hai.

Ladki - tumne toh kaha tha ki Gadi theek hone Me 3 ghante lagenge

Chhote - Gadi Kya tmahre hi paas Hai Humre paas bhi hai Kyu guru.

Chhote ne majakiya laheje me kaha.

Nidhi - tu bhi na nisha Dimaag Kyu nhi istemal Karti inka garage Hai to car bhi hogi hi na .

Shiva unki baat sunta magar koi Jawab nhi deta aur garage ke peeche chala jata hai waha kapde se dhaki hui jeep khadi thi Shiva wo kapda hatata Hai ye ek self modified kale rang ki open jeep thi dekhne se lag raha tha ki kafi maintain karke rakha gaya Hai Shiva use start karta Hai aur use garage ke samne jaha sabhi log the waha leke ata hai

Rohan - Kya jeep Hai yar.

Rishabh - Han be sahi bola

Nidhi - beautiful

Nisha - awesome

Chhote - pagal Hai sab

Is baat pe sabhi use ghoorne lagte Hai.

Chhote - jyada mat ghooro jungle jana hai toh mujhse jara Tameez se pesh aao samjhe.

Sabhi log uski baat Pe nuskura dete Hai.

Nisha - accha Chote sarkar hum apni ghustakhi ki maafi chahte hai ( nisha ne jhuk ke chhote ke kheechte hue kaha)

Chhote - line mat maro meri Pahle hi girlfriend Hai Iam booked.

Sabhi uski baat Pe muskra uthte Hai chhote tha hi aisa Kisi ko bhi hasa skta tha magar Sirf Shiva eklauta insan tha jise wo hasne me abhi tak Kamyab nahi Hua tha magar uski kashish jari thi.


Shiva - chalna Hai ki nahi.

Chhote - Aa rahe Hai guru.

Sabhi log Gadi me baith jate hai bas nisha Rah jati Hai use jagah hi nhi mili aage ki seat Pe chhote peeche nidhi rishabh aur rohan Pahle hi baith chuke the.

Nisha - chhote ji Kya Mai yaha baith skti hu.

Chhote - toh kaha baithunga.

Nisha - meri god me.

Maine Pahle bata diya ki meri girlfriend Hai phir Kyu line mar rahi ho ( chhote ne apne hanth ko sar Pe Mar kar kaha)

Sabhi has diye siway Shiva ke.

Chhote apni jagah se uthta hai aur rohan ki god me bina puche baith jata hai ispe phir Sab khilkhila uthe. Nisha aage baith jati Hai Shiva Gadi start karta Hai aur Sab nikal padte Hai apni manzil jungle ki taraf.

Update continues in jungle plz wait.

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Safar ki shuruat ho chuki thi log Hasi majak kar rahe Sirf Shiva hi khamosh tha chhote sabhi ka Dil bahlane me koi Kasar nahi chod raha tha wahi nisha chhote Pe pyar se line mar rahi jisse wo thoda Gussa ho jata ispe Sab aur jyada haste. Adhe ghante chalne ke baad Shiva Gadi rok deta Hai

Rohan - Kya Hua sir apne Gadi Kyu rok di.

Chhote - dekhta nahi Hai Kya aage sadak band Hai yaha se paidal hi jana padega.

Sabhi log Gadi se utar jate hai

Rishabh - kitna paidal chalna padega.

Shiv - 5 kilometer aur sabhi log mere peeche hi rahna jungle ka mahaul Kuch theek nhi hai aajkal.

Itna kah kar Shiva Chal deta Hai uske peeche sabhi log Chal dete Hai Shiva is waqt tight white T-shirt Pahne hue tha joki uske bajuo Pe kasi hui thi bhari bag uthane ki wajah se uske biceps phool gye nisha use dekhte hi rah gai.

Nisha - what a strong man he is?

Chalte chlte nisha ke Muh se nikla Kisi is Pe dhyan nhi nahi siway chhote ke.

Chhote - phir galat jagah line mar rahi ho.

Chhote ne nisha ne kaha wo sabse peeche Chal rahe the isiliye unki baat koi aur nhi sun PA raha tha.

Nisha-ek baat batao tumhre guru ka nam Kya hai.

Chhote - Shiva naam Hai guru ka.

Nisha - hmm

Wo jungle ke beecho beech Aa gye the waha ek ghas ka maidan tha charon Tarah ped hi ped the sham ke 6 baj rahe the twilight me wo jagah aur bhi khoobsurat lag rahi thi sabhi kafi khush the Rohan aur Rishabh tent lagane lagte Hai Shiva is bag ko kholta Hai aur us me se ek wajandar kulhadi nikalta Hai is kulhadi ko Dekh ke lag raha tha ki uska wajan kam se kam 10 kilo hoga

Shiva - chhote Mai lakdiya katne Ja raha hu Tum sabka dhyan rahna koi us taraf na jye theek Hai

Chhote - theek Hai guru

Shiva waha se chala jata sabhi log ek ghere me baith jate hai aur baten karne lgate magar nisha Sirf Shiva ke bare me soch rahi thi use khoya Hua Dekh ke nidhi rishabh ko ishara karti Hai.

Rishabh - nisha Kya Hua Kuch khoyi khoyi si lag rahi ho bat Kya hai

Rishabh ne majakiya laheje me kaha

Nisha - nahi koi baat nahi

Nidhi - accha Chote sarkar ye batao Shiva ne Kyu kaha ki Tum sabka khyal rakhna yaha koi khatra Hai Kya.

Chhote - nhi koi khas nhi Bas us taraf ek bhediya Hai jo ki adamkhor Hai shayad.

Sabhi log ghbra jate hai sabko Dara Hua Dekh chhote kahta Hai.

Chhote - darne ki baat nahi Hai wo is taraf nahi ata.

Tabhi Shiva un logon ko ata Hua dekhta hai uske right kandhe Pe lakdi ka ek Bahut bhari bundal tha wo paseene me bheeg gya tha uska sawala rang is paseene me nisha ko aur bhi dilkash lag raha tha. Shiva ladkiyon ka bundal zameen Pe rakh deta Hai aur ek kinare apni bottal leke baith jata hai peene lagta Hai. Sabhi lakdiyon se bonfire jalte hai aur games khelne lagte Hai. Unhe waha aye hue 2 ghante ho chuke the sabhi ko bhook lag rahi thi toh nidhi aur nisha ne Khana banana shuru kar diya Shiva pichhle 2 ghanton se pee hi Raha tha use Kisi se koi matlb nhi tha wo apne hi khyalon me khoya Hua cigar ke kash laga rha tha uska dhyan tab tuta jab nisha ne use khane ke liye bulaya Shiva apni jagah se utha aur bottal leke un sabhi ke paas Aa gya chhote sabhi ka khilauna ban gya tha Sab usse hasi majak kar rahe the.

Nisha - ap yaha kabse Hai Sir.

Nisha ne Shiva ko plate dete hue poocha

Shiva - tumse matlb.

Shiva apne usi rookhepan aur sakhti ke saath jawab deta Hai jisse nisha Kuch dukhi si ho jati Hai usse Kbhi Kisi ne aise baat nahi ki thi aur wo bhi Kisi ladke ne toh kabhi nhi wo thi hi Itni pyari 5.4 kad goora badan
Kamar tak aate kale ghane Baal koi dekhe toh bas dekhta hi rah jaye magar Shiva ne use ghas bhi nahi Dali isi baat ne uska ego hurt kar diya. Sabhi log Khana kha chuke the aur bate kar rahe the Shiva phir Usi jagah baith jata hai.

Nisha - Kitna khadoos Hai.

Shiva ko dekhte hue kahti Hai.

Rohan - Kya Hua Kuch btaiyegi.

Chhote - Hona Kya hai bola tha na ki glat jagah line mar rahi ho Ab bhugto.

Nidhi - matlb Tum Shiva is machenic ko like Karti oh god yahi din dekhna Baki Rah gya tha.

Nisha Kuch nahi bolti Bas khamosh baithi rahti Hai use khud nhi pta ki ye Sab uske saath Kya ho raha hai aisa Pahle kabhi uske saath nhi Hua tha.

Kya nisha Shiva se pyar karne lagi Hai Kya wo Shiva ko apne Dil ki baat bta payegi Kya hoga Shiva ka reaction Janne ke liye saath bane rahiy

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