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Update 11

Sabhi log is waqt shahar ke ek bade hospital me operation theater ke bahar khade the. Commissioner Krishmurti bhi unke saath waha maujood the unke saath 6 log aur the (inka intro thodi der me dunga). Sabhi log Kafi pareshan the. Nisha ka toh ro ro ke bura Haal tha. Commissioner Krishmurti bechaini se Idhar Udhar tahal rahe. Operation shuru hue 2 ghante ho chuke the magar doctors ne koi Jawab nhi diya tha. Commissioner Krishmurti ne shahar ke best doctors ki team ko Bula liya tha jo is waqt Shiva ka treatment kar kar rahe.

Operation theatre ka darwaza kholta Hai doctor bahar ata hai. Doctor ko bahar aate Dekh sabhi log uski taraf bhadte Hai.

Commissioner Krishmurti - doctor Ab Kaisi halat Hai.

Doctor - commissioner goliya toh nakal di Hai magar khoon kafi bah chuka ye toh Shiva tha ki abhi tak Zinda koi aur hota toh kab ka Mar chuka hota magar aisa lagta Hai ki Shiva jeena hi nahi khair we are trying our level best Baki Sab upar Wale Pe nirbhar karta Hai.

Doctor ki baat sunke nisha Bahut buri Tarah rone lagti Hai chhote ka bhi yahi Haal tha. Commissioner Krishmurti unke paas jate hai aur kahte Hai.

Commissioner Krishmurti - Kuch nahi hoga Shiva ko wo Pahle bhi maut ki maat de chuka Hai is baar bhi dega Mujhe poora yakeen Hai.

Commissioner Krishmurti poore vishvas ke saath ye kahte Hai.

( Ab Bari hai un 6 logo ke intro ki un 6 logon me 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya thi ladkon ke naam aslam , Deva ,Surya aur Aziz tha aur ladkiyon me naam charu aur tamanna tha)

Deva - maut toh uske liye ek khel Hai use kya ho sakta Hai ki Kyu aslam.

Deva ne haste hue aslam se kaha.

Aslam - bilkul Allah ki rahmat humesha Shiva ke saath rahi Hai.

Tabhi doctor bahar nikalte Hai.

Doctor - Ab halat stable Hai magar able 24 ghante Bahut critical Hai.

Doctor apni kah ke chala jata hai. Aslam waha se hatata Hai aur namaz padhne lagta Hai aur Shiva ke liye dua magta.

Aslam man me hi - ya mere maula Mai janta hu ki Maine zindgi me kai gunah kiye Hai magar ye bhi jnta hu ki tu apne bande ka saath humesha deta Hai. Aaj Mai apne nahi apne yaar ke liye dua mang raha iski Jan baksh de.

Aslam ko namaz padta Dekh nisha apne aasuon pichli Hai aur hospital me ho bane hue ek Chote se mandir ke samne Jake khadi ho jati Hai mandir me shiv ji ki ek murti rakhi hui thi.

Nisha - agar Maine Apki ki Zara si pooja ki hai agar meri prathana me ratti bhar bhi shradha Hai to Aap Shiva ko Kuch nahi hone denge aur agar Shiva ko Kuch bhi Hua toh Mai yahi apke samne apni Jaan dedungi. Jab tak Shiva ko hosh nahi Aa jata tab tak Mai na toh Kuch khaungi na hi Kuch piyungi.

Nisha mandir ke samne jad si baith jati Hai.

Kahte Hai na ki pyar me insan bhagwan se bhi lad jata hai Kuch aisa hi aaj nisha ke saath bhi ho raha tha Ab dekhna ye Hai ki maut aur zindgi ki is ladai me jeet kiski hoti Hai.

Kya nisha aur aslam ki duaye rang layegi Kya Shiva ko hosh Aa jayega ya is baar maut use apne saath le Jane me Kamyab ho jayegi Janne ke liye saath bane rahiye.
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bahat hi lajawaab kahani h bro

superb emotional update...

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